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Francesca Serritella :
It isn’t just the verbal trick of saying the words “but” or “therefore.” It’s about creating propulsive plot through consequential action & conflict.
2022-11-19 04:31:41
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jake m :
yea, you don't get it at all
2022-11-19 04:10:38
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Gregg Perea :
So funny how confidently wrong you are about this one!
2022-11-19 04:19:33
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Shadowban Alert 🎶 :
you missed the point
2022-11-19 01:44:12
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LauraLindseyJones :
I was taught to avoid “but” because it dismisses what was stated.
2022-11-19 19:22:19
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Sonic Prodigy :
and then, somehow palpatine returned.
2022-11-20 04:01:08
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Aerius :
lol its the same . We built our product and then found out it didn't serve the needs of our clients. This advice seems deep but its not
2022-11-19 00:29:09
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Pblizzy :
dude where's my car?
2022-11-18 20:54:05
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https://12d.academy :
these guys are the best in the business at storytelling
2022-11-19 01:19:24
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bobby_k13 :
Replace but with however
2022-11-19 19:42:47
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JetPackMechanic :
I don't think you understand why they have that rule for themselves. it's not because "and then" is inherently boring like your trying to say.
2022-11-18 22:44:49
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PsiPhiFrog :
I think you said another one accidentally, it’s almost “and then” but it has the link feature of the good ones: “and now”
2022-11-18 23:07:32
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Logixand :
Dude, where's your car?
2022-11-19 15:46:53
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TheWorstKnight :
Bro missed the point so hard
2022-11-20 08:15:35
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Potion Cellar :
No and then
2022-11-19 07:37:52
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LitWit :
thank you
2022-11-20 11:48:09
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Julian Farrell :
I think this needs more explanation. A part two would be good with examples
2022-11-24 14:50:19
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Gregg Hinthorn :
This. Gold.
2022-11-18 21:13:06
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Greg :
Therefore, I’m much more of a but man.
2022-11-19 00:44:59
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NotEvenYourRealDad :
Damn
2022-11-20 14:26:50
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David Tucker :
An then I found this
2022-11-19 01:29:11
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Baby cat Mc baby :
You had an “and now” in there
2022-11-20 15:06:10
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馒头 :
This is creative writing 101. Whiplashing the reader between what's expected and something else...
2022-11-20 00:46:14
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