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linds10002 :
Also: search for the word - “by” - that’s how I began to eliminate passive voice in my writing.
2022-12-02 19:18:42
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Space Hurricane :
Me: never planning on writing a novel, also me: Write that down, write that down
2022-12-02 23:18:52
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user5763421 :
I think you’re trying to say use active voice instead of passive lol..
2022-12-12 18:44:39
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ᯓ★ vhalia ³ 💙🏎️ :
tysm bahahahah
2022-12-28 09:47:03
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Moira 🏹 :
Yes. Game changer when I realized this!
2022-12-02 14:48:39
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Kuhtore :
i prefer the lengthier version. feels more immersive. more meadow report.
2022-12-04 01:02:08
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anniemarie023 :
Bless u
2022-12-02 20:08:15
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H :
my la teacher screaming and yelling because if this rn
2022-12-25 19:23:01
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SLHutchinson :
Oh! I haven't heard that one yet. Excellent, I shall use this in my next revision.
2022-12-03 05:19:20
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✌️ :
how do i slow down my writing to draw moments out longer?
2022-12-11 03:34:14
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sipuli :
leaving a comment to stay on writing advice tiktok
2022-12-25 19:17:44
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Tbh :
Thank you this is actually super helpful😭
2022-12-12 11:48:18
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asheeee :
THANK YOU
2022-12-12 00:43:50
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Luke :
The first one seems to have different meanings between the two entirely, at least to me
2022-12-04 18:12:39
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Krispy :
I can't stand the word "exclaimed" 😅
2022-12-26 01:48:54
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kaitlyn 📖 :
Working on a round of edits that’s focused on that rn!
2022-12-23 20:52:30
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Nicole Busse Gavin :
I think our jobs are the same - just taught a lesson on pacing today 😊
2022-12-03 01:14:25
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the something of boris :
saving this for my middle schoolers
2022-12-03 01:10:38
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Z serduszka do uszka :
nice 🥰
2023-02-12 12:00:44
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Sumalee Eaton :
i believe some editors call this "filtering", when a writer filters all action through a character's senses
2022-12-17 05:12:04
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sybbugr :
the pasta was eaten as the chair was pushed back across the room, knocking down some urns. the hero was on his way
2023-01-15 21:11:55
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Desendent of the Muse :
Thank you 🥹
2023-02-03 00:48:49
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daydreamer writess :
this is actually great advice thanks
2023-01-04 01:58:46
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Vanessa Lanang, YA Author :
So much yes!!!!
2023-01-19 02:28:16
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Author Allie Francis 🇨🇦✍️ 📖 :
Great advice! I also had similar feedback! Super common writing issue
2022-12-03 03:01:23
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