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01lunareclipse
Ember :
referring to that first slide, i agree. i’m a black belt and instructor in taekwondo, and one of the things we say is that a 30 second fight will feel
2023-12-22 04:13:23
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marythepirate
Mary the Pirate :
For archery, you do not break a bow when you get stronger, you just draw it more easily. Unless the bow is meant for kids or you're now super tall.
2023-12-21 20:03:32
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mistresssacrifina
MistressSacrifina :
As someone who is practicing fight scenes imma use these tips, thanks!
2023-12-21 19:09:30
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corrdress
Corr Dress :
How do you write a hand to hand combat? Is there any YA book not fantasy with that scenes? Like divergent? 🙏🙏
2024-01-01 18:30:11
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tsukiyomihime
ChiWeiler mom :
Can we get how to write fantasy characters? Like werewolves and vampires, things with high stamina or pain tolerance?
2023-12-21 19:44:17
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tonipology
Toni ☆ 𝖠𝗇𝗈𝗆𝖺𝗅𝖨𝖤𝖤 :
hand to hand fighting is so exhausting. I’ve done experienced hand to hand fights for 2 minutes alone 3 times in a row with short breaks (martial arts) and it’s so fatiguing
2023-12-24 07:12:41
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twilightsunder
Jordad :
Aftermaths are impactful too. The thing I remember most clearly about the Inheritance cycle was Eragon describing the blood seeping into his boots.
2023-12-26 18:09:37
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silverclawz
Silverclawz :
(2) kind, be it pleasure, fear, anger, grief. No one recalls what others were doing when they see the one they love collapse.
2023-12-23 19:24:07
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nothingsadly
nothingsadly :
I have to ask, if you could give us an example of how to use these tips at the end of the slide, as to get a better idea!
2023-12-22 22:22:07
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user972991297703
user972991297703 :
Nice list, I will also add how important is height and weight in the fight.
2024-01-01 02:19:50
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jajinkies
Jenz :
THANK YOU I’ve been saying this for years, and why I hate reading ya fantasy even though I love fantasy
2023-12-22 22:29:32
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astral_entity2
Astral :
Now how do these rules apply when it comes to like superhuman beings
2023-12-22 18:31:35
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bridie306222
bridie :
Can you write getting stabbed? Thanks so much for all your videos, they’re so helpful!!
2023-12-21 23:24:50
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demondogamity
samule21 :
thank you! I'm writing my first fanfic rn amd am about to hit a big fight but had no idea how to write it-this gave me direction!! tysm
2023-12-29 11:24:54
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absentmindednihilist
AbsentmindedNihilist :
Also people who never throw punches before sometimes break their knuckles doing it wrong
2024-01-02 23:16:53
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siiracaithesupernal
Siiracai Supernal :
Having it all laid out like this is perfect. I read a lot of books with combat, and this puts to words what feels right about the best scenes.
2024-01-13 17:12:28
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greatwallofno
ACCESS_DENIED :
It's always a good idea to read your work out loud while in the editing phase. Sometimes hearing it helps you catch things that seeing it misses. For
2023-12-30 11:47:35
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randomphantomx
RandomPhantomX :
referring to the archers slide, YES. Bows are given to a person strictly depending on height and draw back strength. My current one is ~45 lbs if 1/
2024-01-03 10:15:12
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alej0831
Alej31 :
Omg, thnx so mucho for these tips! I needed this for my fighting scenes!
2023-12-21 19:34:40
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yugioh_evilau
Helena <3 🦊💜 :
THANK YOU! There’s a lot of physical fighting in my story, this will really help! <3
2023-12-27 08:06:51
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the_everglades_draon
The Everglades draon :
as someone that uses a bow (old fashion and newer ones) this tracks
2023-12-22 23:01:40
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xeno_leywin
Mr. Depravity (Xeno)𒉭 :
The amount of things i've learned from this channel are so much appreciated 🙏 It helps me a lot thank you
2024-02-12 14:30:32
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frymondius
Fry🍉✡️ :
I would amend slide 11. Use sentences that match the tempo of the fight / your own style. Clipped, phrased, or run-on sentences each tell a diff story
2023-12-26 11:18:37
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mrjfunhouse
Joshua Justus :
"there's no such thing as a painless fight. you throw a punch with an unprotected hand it will hurt. endurance, and a quick body can be as effective"
2023-12-23 05:49:53
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