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Aye Tech girlie 👩🏾💻📚 :
Can I see an example in first person? "I feel like im already doing this when I write." 😂
2024-03-12 15:53:51
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lynnisamystery :
This is one of the BEST examples I’ve seen of what show don’t tell means. Ppl always say it but I never knew how to get there
2024-01-25 21:30:42
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Lucyfay89 :
The consequences of minimum word counts in school writing assignments. 😆
2024-01-24 20:37:47
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Siree Arden :
can you put the subtitles lower next time that way I can read along?
2024-01-25 01:18:51
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salvatore bonpensiero :
What if you wrote "April looked out the window and car no wheel. Strange?"
2024-01-28 01:24:54
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ChickenBabiesCute :
The first one is so much stronger in my opinion. I like internal observation from character.
2024-01-26 19:40:41
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Elizabeth :
Thank you for putting a visual example up, sometimes if you listen you don't always understand
2024-03-04 23:53:59
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OR.LOVE :
I really hope AI will help us with things like that 🥰
2024-04-17 15:26:50
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vernmckey :
Oh my god you just made something BIG click for me THANK YOU
2024-01-24 22:26:04
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traptummies :
Had a college teacher mark points off every time we used a pronoun 🤦🏻♂️lowkey it did help us write better, but my god was it the worst thing ever
2024-01-25 07:02:20
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Ronin S. Ravenhurst :
I'm looking for a new program that I can write my stuff in (I hand write it before anything). do you have any suggestions?
2024-04-07 20:47:40
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Jackson Utz :
This is such great advice. I’ve been editing through a book of mine, and the sheer amount of “saw” or “felt” is crazy
2024-02-23 16:44:11
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shawnorrific :
Bookmarking! I struggle with this a lot.
2024-04-03 14:31:13
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Mimi Truong :
What kind of writing is this for? Because descriptive words are vital for descriptive/creative writing, no?
2024-04-05 13:06:07
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ChickenWing :
they need to do this with textbooks bc I feel like there is so much filler
2024-03-25 07:32:26
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- 𝐌𝐚𝐫𝐬𝐡 - 🩻❄️ :
show don't tell
2024-03-06 20:55:02
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Sammctalk :
I'll remember this and to avoid passive voice.
2024-01-25 02:11:41
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Pixel Ate Books :
Oh man this was great!
2024-03-17 23:52:09
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Whitney :
i genuinely like the first one better though
2024-03-21 22:31:14
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rave :
thank you!!! please never delete this!!!
2024-03-05 23:43:10
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Castle Grey Brem :
thank you I've been having this issue
2024-01-25 00:14:00
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magii :
THIS IS ACTUALLY SO HELPFUL 😭 the example helps so much instead of just saying "show don't tell"
2024-03-06 19:06:02
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gobraxoqlbr :
Ok but from the second, I’d be confused how she knew. The looking out of the window could’ve been kept in imho.
2024-01-27 15:57:50
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