I can do dialogue just fine, I just struggle sm with action- he did this, he did that, she did this, she did that. I CANNOT write it and make it sound nice and ugh I hate it
2025-01-30 08:03:48
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LeftSand :
What if they’re both mute? 💔
2025-10-31 18:50:37
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🎐🫧🦋𝙺𝚊𝚕𝚐𝚞𝚜✶⋆.˚꩜ .ᐟ˙⋆✶ :
I know this is a bit late, but any advice or suggestions for improvement would be good. (English isn't my first language)
2025-12-12 08:24:18
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Tangalanga 🚦 :
hi! off topic question but- how would someone raised in a homophobic household react/handle a gay crush?? (writing a character RN but don't know if I'm getting the mood right because I was raised in a very accepting house)
2025-12-16 16:29:55
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moonie :
tip for tip #1 I basically write my character's dialogues as if im playing a game of who said this, one of my characters is so unserious that's why their dialogues would have the same vibe😅
2024-06-24 14:28:25
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💗Aubrey💗 :
“in under three minutes.” the video is 7 minutes. 😭😭😭
2025-07-23 03:55:03
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azira wonder ❤️ :
you look like fall idk how to put it 😭 thanks for the tips!!
2024-06-24 17:00:46
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Khoruss :
Your videos are saving me rn, I’m still learning to write subtext so we’ll see how this goes yIPPEE!
2024-08-25 16:58:29
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勝詩花 :
is it ok to write about two classmates or is that weird like I won't show no one but uhm.. that might be weird
2025-07-29 02:28:20
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kristin :
my problem is that I for the love of god cannot come up with dialogue 😫 I know how my chapters start and how they end, but I have no idea how to get there (via dialogue)
2025-02-18 23:01:54
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Cat :
My problem is, I need to find the perfect dialogue to start my chapter until it sounds "cool" for me.😭
2025-05-14 01:17:14
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JUSTEN🏳️🌈 /🎸📏 :
watching videos about writing so I get out of write block🙏
2025-10-18 18:02:43
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jackjlacey | Author :
This is so helpful 🖤
2024-06-19 07:43:32
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Valens🦊⭐️ :
what I sometimes do as an "exercises" I watch dnd parties on yt or twitch the dialogs are not extremely good but it helps me to focus on voice and character
2024-09-15 13:05:19
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Linn:] :
Could I also imagine that the book is getting made or IS a movie :^ ?,, like I do that sometimes but what are other peoples thoughts on this "technique" (?)
2024-06-19 11:44:37
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𝙼𝚊𝚛𝚢𝙸𝚜𝙰𝙳𝚒𝚟𝚊 :
also make the characters say different slangs from one another, like one say bro and the other say queen
2025-08-24 02:43:19
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Caitlin Parker :
Such good information! Thank you!
2024-06-23 17:25:57
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Luna :
after I saw this, I've incorporated exercise 2 since then. Just straight dialogue and adding everything else after. it HELPED ME so much to actually find the writing style for me
2024-07-07 11:35:42
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ThomIs0ut :
i love how they called me out 😭😭❤️❤️
2026-03-04 20:31:02
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Jasper i think | 🐀💥⚔️ , ⭕ :
I PUT A COMMEY AND I CAN'T FIND IT
2025-05-26 17:40:21
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bug🍎🐛 :
you can watch TV or read manga! because manga has images so that you know the setting so most of the text is speech ♥
2026-01-22 20:38:20
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DarthFayah :
i feel like the way i make them talk is gonna be annoying the reader. for example in a friendgroup: As the tv turned off Mary looked over at james frowning slightly “Could you not turn that off?” James smirked and quickly replied “I could…But why would i do that?” “Because you’re being a d##k James” Violet says from the kitchen
2025-09-05 17:10:56
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🗡️🌕🌊𝓶𝓸𝓸𝓷_𝓬𝓸𝓻𝓪𝓵🪸💥 :
U look like my choir teacher, which is is a complement
2025-08-31 21:22:22
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JKcCovers :
love this tips.... I do create book cover design could you have some tips for the covers tha will attract
2024-09-06 12:01:14
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🏜 GeorgAHA🚦📎 :
May i ask where you got that sweater its so cute
2024-07-28 23:04:12
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