@elysemyers: Inspired by an overheard concersation at a farmers market. I write a short story a day and most of them are terrible (this is to be expected). But sometime's they're not! And sometimes I want to share them with you. This is one of them! Enjoy! 🤍

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annaerose87
Anna Rose 🌿🌹📚🍄☕️🐲🪄🫶 :
Wait. You freaking wrote this? I was just looking up the book lol My hat is off to you. And, as an editor, we'll done. *drops mic and walks off
2024-10-11 02:44:50
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vanticele
ValentinaCele :
I am exhausted for this female character. Your writing is so good!!
2024-10-11 02:15:30
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aarch08
aarch08 :
This was such a good read! Thanks for sharing :)
2024-12-01 03:35:56
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sia.111
sia.1111 🇵🇸 :
Such a strong narrative voice. That, combined with the humor & realism, makes this such a fun read! Keep going!
2024-10-11 01:19:39
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lex02801
lex :
Okay but this felt like the best opening to a novel. Elyse, you’re so talented! Thank you for sharing parts of your life with us again, even though we are undeserving. I’ve missed you.
2024-10-11 01:12:09
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hazel.love1081
Hazel-love :
The last line is superb, perfect ending.
2024-10-11 01:17:58
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meghanjustice
Meghan Justice :
This reminds me of a friend and her soon to be ex husband. She got tired of arguing with her George about everything.
2024-10-11 01:35:49
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melissanehrling
Melissa Nehrling :
When does the book publish!!!?! ❤️❤️❤️
2024-10-11 04:49:08
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shawneesmith34
ShawneeB 🦋 SAHM :
I knew from the start I had to finish the whole thing cause the ending would be the best!
2024-10-15 02:47:49
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candiwild
Candi :
That is the absolute best story I have read in a very long time! Your talent never ceases to amaze me. So glad you’re back!
2024-10-14 02:17:09
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thagingerhasasoul
Ginger :
"You think everything you feel is the truth, and anyone who feels differently is wrong." I needed those words to make sense of why my husband's arguments bothered me so much. Divorced now and relating
2024-10-29 03:46:50
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kflynn413
Kfwalker :
This would make a great one act play. ♥️
2024-10-15 04:24:54
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wonderfulworldofjill777
WonderfulWorldofJill 🍉🌈💙 :
Wow wow wow. What a compelling read! I think you’re working on a book, yes? I would love that!
2024-10-13 20:11:52
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chelsiewoodward4
chelsiewoodward4 :
You are such a skilled person in so many areas ! I wish I was more like you !
2024-10-11 06:52:21
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hillllybillly
hillllybillly :
This is the perfect opening to a novel! I pictured the characters as Lorelai and Luke from Gilmore girls, until the last line. So maybe more Lane and Zach. because F zach. he would hate brie 🙄
2024-10-11 01:24:06
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smallcheato
Adien :
You never cease to amaze me
2024-10-11 01:14:03
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boomernicholson
boomernicholson :
okay. but I like Blue Cheese.
2024-10-23 02:35:14
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dannika.lauren
Dannika Roggie 📚 :
I. LOVE. THIS.
2024-10-12 22:40:48
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tessastacy_
tessastacy_ :
I love this. It inspires me to take all my thoughts and put them on paper. You’re amazing!
2024-10-15 14:39:35
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caffeinebasedlifeform913
Caffeine Based Life Form :
Wow. I can't even come up with words to explain how much I am moved by this. They all seem inadequate. Brava!
2024-10-11 01:19:19
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karenmk30
karenmk30 :
I love it!!!!
2024-10-11 05:33:36
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ericaluckedean
Erica Lucke Dean :
I’m genuinely rethinking how I take my coffee now. Are there really “notes” in the flavor I’m
2024-10-31 13:43:52
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lexilexlealex
alex :
this style (and subject matter) of writing reminds me of other people’s houses by abbi waxman. such a good read!
2024-10-15 16:26:37
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vickt0rina
Victoria :
Very nice. Opening really caught me. Please submit it somewhere.
2024-10-11 01:21:55
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