Christina Bagni
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Wednesday 29 January 2025 14:41:01 GMT
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The Fenox :
but I want to write a bad book
2025-01-29 16:45:33
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Simone Genevieve 🇳🇿 :
Wisdom was chasing him, but he was faster
2025-01-31 11:48:06
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Ryan :
Imply the character is doing the seeing, feeling, hearing. Don’t say it
2025-01-29 20:03:52
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Rad :
“He felt sad.” “A dark emotion creeps up his back, chilling his blood in the process.” Chat? Do yall think this good? I’ve been working on writing fanfiction, but it keeps sounding bland
2025-05-07 03:57:26
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ʀᴀʏs :
this is why i stopped writing, too many sweats
2025-01-31 20:48:08
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T.A.O. (My actual initials) :
Thank you!!!
2026-06-19 04:15:27
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🩷 :
But also! Don’t overuse removing ur character or get *too* caught up in the creative verb thing to the point where it’s just flowery. Same rule as “sometimes it’s okay to just use ‘said’”
2025-01-30 01:41:52
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Teresar :
I think this is a good tip, but if its over used it can give the feeling that the character is disconnected from their surroundings
2025-01-30 01:20:08
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robertsilverman55 :
I’m not a writer, but I enjoyed that
2025-01-29 20:13:07
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Quinn of the Grimm :
"he felt a sharp pain explode across his back" 😭😭 even if I was reading a normal chill book, I'm gonna think things escalated 150% and that he actually exploded and that he died 😭🤣
2025-01-30 20:37:11
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LadyShame :
Isn’t this passive va active voice? Am I remembering English Lit class correctly? If so didn’t they tell us not to do this? I agree it sounds better though!!
2025-01-30 00:41:15
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Shannon :
I actually do this to appear non-demanding in work emails. For ex. Instead of “you need to submit the paperwork” I say “paperwork will need to be submitted.” It’s really changed the tone of my emails.
2025-01-30 02:02:58
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objectivelycorrect_ :
Of course, you don’t want to overdo it. Lots of new writers abuse writing tricks and it stands out very clearly.
2025-01-30 07:30:24
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Sura :
When I read passages like that, I feel like someone is wrting a paper that has a mandatory word count.🤪
2025-01-30 15:55:50
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✍️📚 Charles Griffiths :
Thanks for the great tip. Or should I say, " Your insightful tip evokes a sense of creativity in me"😊
2025-01-31 05:06:49
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Henry :
I like this in moderation when reading but it can be overused a lot and it becomes very obnoxious. a mix of this and the more simple way is ideal for me.
2025-01-31 00:17:30
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greencoats :
Unless it’s technical writing
2025-01-30 02:51:13
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jpwentthere :
A cool video swept into my For You page
2025-01-29 22:36:21
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Hollowtip429 :
can you over use this?
2025-01-30 01:01:20
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Luke 👑 :
Not me writing “I felt a sharp pain” then 5 seconds later seeing the video 😭
2025-10-15 00:59:52
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Habiba💫 :
but I think that there should be a balance between the both so the entire book doesn't sound like it's spitting poetry in my face
2026-01-12 16:09:16
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SlimJimJames :
I like basic sentences. I’m not a fan of flowery language when I’m reading or writing. Still good points though.
2025-01-31 06:34:23
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Happily Here :
I’ve learned that writing is a precarious balancing act of all the advice I’ve ever been given on how to (and how not to) write 🫣🤣
2025-01-30 18:35:34
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OpinionatedAsianDad :
this depends on the POV and narrative voice.
2025-01-30 17:54:26
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