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🫐 :
Why are college essay grader people so damn picky like just accept the essay yall should be grateful people choose to apply to ur school 😭
2025-03-07 08:15:00
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Shams :
why do we make fun of kids who come up with "corny" essays when they're told they need exceptional ones to even get the education they deserve?
2025-03-04 07:49:14
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TikToker :
My first sentence or hook was "Thatrobloxggirl signing in." And my last was "Thatrobloxggirl signing out." My whole essay was about a roblox game, flee the facility 😭😭 got in Tulane tho
2025-03-02 17:37:53
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Sophie :
Imagine your essay is one of these
2025-03-02 18:23:43
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sophie iverson :
then what the hell do we write
2025-03-12 03:32:17
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beau :
i feel like the point of like getting into a school is to learn something. i get that there should be some requirements, but why are people judged on how mind-blowing their essay is?
2025-03-07 16:59:48
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🫶🏽 :
Atp i feel like she just hates every hook like what do i write anymore🙃
2025-03-02 22:59:25
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Allie :
Mine was, "I, like most children, grew up with an imaginary friend— when my peers outgrew their's, mine stayed with me". My essay was about being disabled in a mainstream school
2025-03-07 20:27:15
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katflint :
mine was “my favorite stuffed animal blew up in the dryer when i was four”, and i got into my top choices!!
2025-03-04 01:52:32
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aaam :
how about “you are hooked pspspspsppspsps read my essay psspspspspsp”
2025-03-27 08:05:42
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eliss :
i started my EC supplemental saying “i’ve always wished to be british” and going into how ive found joy in progressing youth education as a children’s librarian assistant through peppa pig ☠️
2025-03-02 20:28:30
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Kendall 💕 :
why are you guys getting mad at her for DOING HER JOB she is literally getting paid to IMPROVE people’s essays so ofc she is giving criticism
2025-03-08 03:06:16
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georgia hope :
Mine was literally “My grandmother is buried in my backyard”
2025-03-03 03:20:49
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klo :
Maybe these are written by real students rather than by professionals hired by their parents. Or maybe they are brilliant stem students who aren’t the flashiest of writers
2025-03-03 08:05:20
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_toenailsthefirst :
people are actually so butthurt. do u rly think harvard would look at an essay that says “in this essay i will..” and say well i’m grateful they applied. i will only be unreasonable to have a strict+
2025-03-08 01:30:01
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Waltz Disco :
never submitting without walter writes
2025-05-04 08:59:13
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🌸 Sophia 🌸 :
THEN WHAT DO I WRITEEEUHHH 😭
2025-03-28 04:07:16
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Yumi :
I don't think these are absolutely terrible but the last one, you're applying for college so why are you trashing academic classes and praising football 😭
2025-03-05 04:21:13
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shai :
Then what the hell do we write
2025-04-01 15:46:12
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Lizze_K9_ZR23 :
I started mine with "My grandma killed my grandad with a feather"😭 ìn the end I revealed that the feather is a methphor for poison 💀
2025-03-03 03:44:32
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#1 VEE STAN !! 🌙🦉✨ :
if you use “in this essay” or [famous quote here] or if you put “in conclusion” at the end, you should get an automatic 0.
2025-03-07 21:56:40
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Maureen :
Everyone in the comments attacking you but you are 100% correct
2025-04-02 19:57:05
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kaz 😽 :
my opening was a quote from my dad: “i am not looking for your opinion or take on things. i am looking for you to listen.”
2025-03-11 09:22:00
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mai :
My hook was a quote “I don’t have to do nothing but stay black and die.” And it was about my fear of death and how my little cousins death changed my perception of it
2025-03-03 17:20:44
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👽 :
My was basically something like “I’m really obsessed with (my degree topic) and I will spend the rest of my life doing this, this is my life purpose.” And now I’m in grad school. Planning on PhD. 🫡
2025-03-10 03:39:22
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