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Sarah :
I hate this part of college applications. I am great at math. I am a great technical writer. Am i able to write a compelling personal essay? No. Shouldn't hold me back.
2025-03-03 13:12:19
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holy_mollyyy7 :
Mine start with "I hate cooking with my dad", I plan to show my challenge in socializing when my voice wasn't heard and how it ended up in me leading into a role of leadership when I grew up, is it k?
2025-03-02 18:51:44
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shifty :
I’ve never been the star. Not on the court, not in the classroom, not even in my friend group. I’m the sixth man—the one who doesn’t start the game but changes it. is this a good hook
2025-04-07 02:12:19
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LILLIAN!!!!! 🦓 :
WAIT CAN YOU TELL ME IF MY FIRST IDEA IS FIRE mine is only a draft but it starts with "To me, Sonic drinks are a time, place, and person." AND THEN IT TALKS ABOUT HOW MY SISTER HAD TO RAISE ME AND 1/2
2025-03-02 23:15:49
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Don't Chuck It Up :
college counselor here - I agree with these tips! thanks for sharing!
2025-03-03 04:37:12
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🌀🦋islandofcats💜💜 :
Would it be okay to write about a moment that made me realize what I wanted to be in the future??!
2025-03-02 22:09:23
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ray ☆ :
my essay about my adoption and how i came to accept my situation for what it is got me into my top choice with a merit scholarship :) i used a maya angelou quote in the hook
2025-03-03 20:53:03
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evi.morgan :
What if I start mine with “Thank you Toothless for rewriting my life” (toothless as in the dragon from httyd 😭)
2025-03-05 19:20:29
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User :
Math AI sl hodder book cover in the back 😭😭
2025-03-07 15:53:49
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Cosi 🎀 :
Is it okay to be planning for this even before high school? I’m really curious and excited for it 🤭
2025-03-04 01:27:58
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C2Tac :
My hook was “What are people” I feel like it’s weak but not week
2025-03-03 22:20:48
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Hipmomellie :
My son is struggling to find a good hook starting but he has a great idea on what to write about
2025-03-02 18:15:17
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alisa27890 :
Do u recommend any apps that helps u practice writing essays
2025-03-08 20:00:52
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maddie :
Would I be able to talk about my trauma and how I grew from that? Would that be good?
2025-03-08 23:18:11
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Khannaorlando1 :
Let them write whatever they want in whatever way they want
2025-03-02 18:04:12
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Lia :
How do you find ur metaphor
2025-03-08 23:15:50
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hersheysquirt.com :
I love your account because I’m totally not just a sophomore and ready to write a college essay
2025-03-07 12:29:44
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Riley 💕 :
I wanna talk about trying to fit in after moving schools and then how I grew and realized that I don’t need to change how I am. Is this too basic?
2025-05-19 01:48:17
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Usekarma :
lowkey walter writes ai humanizer is underrated
2025-04-14 09:32:42
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Jenny :
Your advices are amazing!!! Please please keep making these videos they’re very clear and helpful.
2025-03-02 22:50:48
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makena black :
does nyu allow a personal statement for transfer students? i know there’s the “why nyu essay” but idk about the personal statement 😭
2025-03-02 20:55:22
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Viva :
I want to go into fashion merchandising and for my essay im doing common app prompt 1 and want to use thrift stores as a metaphor for expression and stepping out of your comfort zone and my supplemental essay for one of the colleges I want to go to is gonna be about perks of being a wallflower, and how stepping into a school, not knowing anyone and how this book impacted me!
2025-05-30 10:50:24
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🄳olly 🪲 :
I'm like ramen, you either love it or hate it [proud]
2025-03-24 01:49:44
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betül :
mine start with "a random tuesday in school", im planning on talking about the different personalities of people that they show in different places and times, to same person or different ones 1/2
2025-03-09 22:33:34
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aden :
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2025-03-03 00:21:07
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