First line: I’m buried alive, again. Second line: atleast this time they had the decency to leave my clothes on.
2025-03-11 02:27:09
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caty ☽ :
i never wanna leave writertok
2025-10-05 03:35:17
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chris/Potato :
Reading the comments makes me insecure about my own writing 😭😭
2025-03-11 19:18:11
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MissFire :
First line: “It was the second worst day of my life” . He then proceeds to be an absolute drama queen the rest of the novel with many more “worst days of his life”
2025-03-11 15:25:08
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cookidoughh :
maybe i just suck at writing cause these comments are so creative
2025-04-04 20:18:41
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Cait 🚦 :
Mines literally “Good morning, how can I help?” Followed by someone asking if she works there and her responding with “No, I just happen to be standing behind the counter because I feel like it.”
2025-03-10 13:37:59
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CandyKorn :
Mine starts by saying “so we all know why we’re here” “cause there’s a dead body”
2025-03-11 07:14:13
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Syl :
mine says "*love interest*, this is for you!" before throwing a basketball towards the hoop... only to miss
2025-03-18 09:01:06
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IHateSchool :
I prefer using lines that doesn't match or tell anything about the character, for confusion
2025-03-11 17:12:32
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♤Karma♤ :
sometimes yes, sometimes no. a lot of the time I write about backstabbing or slowly turning, so
2025-03-10 04:48:25
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Arin | Writer 📚📝🏳️⚧️ :
Arcane uses this tactic FLAWLESSLY! Ekko's first line is "Gimme a few seconds" for Viktor Jesus' sake!
2025-03-10 00:32:18
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sam :
People in the comments confusing the first line of THE CHARACTER with the first line of THE BOOK goes a long way toward explaining why there are so many trash books being published.
2025-03-12 05:57:35
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gabriella 🪚 :
except mine does the opposite because she’s supposed to trick you. her first line is simply “the feeling that follows the loss of a loved one is never a good one”. you’re supposed to think she’s a mourning fiance’. she did in fact murder him. 😔💔
2025-05-13 05:57:19
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Writer’s_Page :
My first chapter is a torture scene…
2025-03-11 20:31:18
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coffeetzkko :
The first line of my Mc is: “I could drop dead right now, quite literally.“ as he’s teetering at the edge of a cliff 😭
2025-03-10 12:33:15
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💜☆~Fin~☆💜 :
first line of mine- "the first thing Ash blacked learned about thought was that they didnt knocked" - intrusive thoughts
2025-12-22 14:27:24
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ele (Taylor’s version) :
My protagonist's first line be like: “what?”
2025-03-11 07:23:47
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Sara :
„I killed someone“ HAHAHAHA
2025-03-11 16:09:52
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A.A. ALHAFEED / WRITTER🥤☕️ :
Kinda agree because must focus on character development
2025-03-09 23:49:17
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hyperfixations :
“I can’t see you, but I know you’re there”
2025-03-10 15:20:30
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EMRYS :
Commenting to stay on writertok🩷
2025-04-19 09:06:05
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kai 🦷 :
mine is "Breathe in; Breathe out. This was the way to live. The way to survive. Enough to."
2025-03-11 21:55:28
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Tobias :
Commenting to stay on Writertok
2025-05-31 16:41:58
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𝐍𝐎𝐕𝐀’🌿 :
“1157 days in a cell for a crime I didn’t commit.. or maybe I did.”
2025-03-11 15:52:00
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krysten errol 🎬 :
my mc didn’t speak until her death 😛
2025-04-27 16:25:08
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