@aspace2write: How to avoid ‘flat’ writing and instantly add tension to a scene ✍️ #writingtips #novelinprogress #fictionwriter #howtowriteabook

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jensnoop
user4254157977383 :
I have a chapter where the two characters are lying to each other. the reader knows they're both lying but both characters trust each other. so that's fun :)
2025-03-25 18:35:29
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daviddraco
David Draco 🇪🇺 :
Interesting. I would probably solve it completely the opposite way: I'd skip it. 😅 End of previous chapter: they start conversation. Start of new chapter: One character is stunned in disbelief. End.
2025-03-25 15:12:49
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melerude
MELERUDE (amon dickrider) :
My book (i hope) will be a in-universe existing report and researches about a "science subject", do you have any advice?
2025-04-15 21:29:42
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graciewako
Destiny :
Good advice. thank you
2025-03-31 17:27:06
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sunshineecos
🃁 Betty in Wonderland🂡 :
Hey love your video can you help me with some similar situation? What should i do if the chapter has a really important truth or dare/ two truths and a lie scene? Like one of the truths will reveal a
2025-04-29 18:58:47
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epipoiesis
Epipoiesis :
Yeah, every dialogue needs conflict, big or small. Also, try to make it do several things at once. Drop not just exposition but also characterization, or add/advance a subplot.
2025-03-26 10:26:29
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antichildwinter
Anti :
And on the flips side where both characters have info they wanna tell a 3rd but one is against telling and the other is arguing for the truth.
2025-03-31 03:31:54
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xoxvnd
Veronica 🌸💜 :
How did you know? 😂
2025-04-25 16:19:27
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shasmanuscripts
Aris || Author 🏳️‍🌈 :
My go to saviour: Self reflection and backstory snippets😂 Without it I doubt my friends would've been able to stay awake during proof reading 😅
2025-03-31 18:02:58
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melissa_author1
melissa_author1 :
I’m trying to rewrite the first chapter of my ever first draft but it’s feel flat even if I improve the writing meanwhile the others drafts that I started feel more vivid.. I’m kinda confused about it
2025-04-24 09:39:51
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deanfantasyauthor
Dean M | Fantasy Author 📚 :
great point!
2025-03-25 19:34:24
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cosmicstudiosofficial
Hector| The Cosmic Ones author :
once flat then it's either repurposed or out! no other way around it for me 😬
2025-03-30 20:44:37
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mariekluver
Marie Klüver-Kristensen :
What I do is give up half the information and let my MC figure out the rest through the plot. It also makes the reader have to guess but following the inner monologue, we aren’t completely blindsided
2025-04-03 09:46:11
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the...leo1g1
the....leo1g1 :
I'm on a "calm down" chapter the main characters they're chilling in a lake, there are some moments between them all that it's a well deserved break but!
2025-05-08 04:57:23
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r0tt1ng_b0dii
Rigor Mortis :
2025-12-25 21:09:21
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