@zamorwrites: If your emotional scenes aren’t landing, this one’s for you. 🥲 Episode 8 of Writing 101 is all about how to write scenes that hurt in the best way — the kind that make readers cry, highlight, and never forget. Let’s make them feel it. 💥 #writing101 #writertok #authortok #BookTok #writingtips

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vroobboo
Uncle :
is this plot good? wife have husband, husband full in ignores her, won't eat her stuff and won't speak to her, he keeps on leaving the house, she follows him one day and he's at her grave, she's dead and she doesn't know it
2025-10-17 18:51:28
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.rubychamp
ruby 🧟‍♂️ :
hi, do you have any tips for writing a betrayal? A trusted friend who was discovered to be working against them all along.
2025-04-17 17:11:19
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_uros_256
uros_☦️ :
Hey, I am currently on a scene where one of my main characters is supposed to write their future plans as the ruler. She does not know what to write for her preparation and she is spiraling. She took a brwak but yet again stressed herself out when she began writing again. Is the scene good if ut made me tense? She is supposed to cry at the end because the other main character is not there to pick her up, they had a fight. Now, I didn't really feel like wanting to cry with her but it is also the first draft and the 4 chapter of my book. I try for each chapter to have 10 pages
2026-06-15 16:34:57
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insearchofmrdarcy
Christina|Author|Bad-Ass🇨🇦 :
Question. I just finished a scene that I can’t read out loud without crying. How do I know it’s good or if I’m just too hormonal?
2025-04-16 21:19:46
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strugglingmj
Mark Lowes | Author & D&D DM :
I wrote an MC who cried often. I learned to hold back the tears. My MMC cried for the first time in my book when he thought he had lost everything. Hits harder. Save the tears!
2025-04-15 18:45:24
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jupit3r.jup1ter_
ᖭི༏ᖫྀ :
„Show us their humanity!“ Its not a human…
2025-07-13 22:39:52
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yuk1_koo
.✦ ݁˖laceyy :
will making a character have a crush on their friend only for their crush to die a few hours later, not even having a chance to confess make the reader sad? or not? I need tips.
2026-03-17 13:44:23
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kinginanamannubayan
Bluewss :
I need that pacing lesson rn😭😭 like
2025-04-16 03:06:26
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xszqaa
𝑀♕. | 𝘸𝘳𝘪𝘵𝘦𝘳 :
originally my fmc cried a lot, i then re-read my book and realised that when the tears mattered the most they didn’t stand out so i rewrote it and it definitely has a much bigger impact than before
2025-04-15 19:06:16
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ddavinoss
. ☁︎ ⭑ 𝓭avid :
i was bleeding through one of my chapters since i accidentally put my own trauma into it. 🥲
2025-04-24 15:13:49
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riareads_aaron4life
Ria Warner (I miss my wife) :
.. I make myself cry? does that work 😭?
2025-09-14 07:44:02
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mariekluver
Marie Klüver-Kristensen :
I find tears to be flat. Like they don’t mean much. I am more emotionally invested when people shout, yell and generally argue, because they’re hurt rather than just falling to their knees with tears
2025-04-15 22:38:19
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official_mpesh
Mpendulo Maluleke :
love love love
2025-04-15 20:09:34
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themondaymuse
TheMondayMuse 🇭🇲📚✍🏼 :
My only goal is to make my readers sob uncontrollably 🤣
2025-05-04 00:50:57
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allison_frieden
Allison Frieden | Writer :
YOU HAVE THE BEST ADVICE! ❤️
2025-04-15 18:38:45
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_lizzie2112
_lizzie2112 :
Love your advice 🫶🏻thank you
2025-04-15 18:24:35
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moonie111280
moonie :
I just use erwin smith from aot as reference, dude wanted to see what's in that basement so bad😭
2025-05-30 05:37:26
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eli_sha133333
Elxishaa :
Squid Games writer 🙃
2025-06-28 15:06:12
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thedarkinside213
The Ever Cache :
I felt like my sad scene hit when I had to step away cause I was crying. 😂
2025-04-17 09:10:46
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indecisiveindiee
✨ :
As a new writer, OH MY GOODNESS I'M SO THANKFUL FOR THISS ❤️❤️
2025-04-18 13:28:51
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irenecollectz
Briellecollectz :
This actually helped me a lot!
2026-03-31 14:31:29
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itsss.peace
🩺🪼🪁 :
“Let the pain whisper”
2025-05-04 18:55:13
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just_a_fan52526
just_a_fan :
seriously THANK YOU...🙇🏻‍♀️your tips really helps
2025-04-23 06:14:20
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oma8876
🩷🤍💜🖤💙OMA🖤🩶🤍💜 :
also you can make a character not process it, denial, also reflect on your sad moments you can pick apart emotions you can add because you've experienced them yourself
2025-05-08 03:27:52
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king_of_misery
kingofmisery_ :
got any tips for a story about healing from trauma?
2025-10-14 02:10:34
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