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iriz_love4lasanga :
This is so beautiful the way you write reminds me a lot of Suzanne Colins
2025-04-18 03:24:12
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Cee 🚦 :
Wow, your writing is fantastic. Please keep at it, the world needs these kinds of stories right now
2025-04-18 03:36:42
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EverythingsRosie :
reading this directly after reading Miriam's story hits different
2025-04-30 21:34:45
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marie :
The duality in these first two parts is wonderful! How their communication is viewed as language, expression by one and control by the other. I love the layering, keep at it!
2025-04-25 15:07:43
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adam :
“even their peace is a weapon” goes so hard unfortunately. your writing is beautiful youre gonna be massive someday
2025-04-18 06:34:56
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☁️ :
the clarity between the dual povs is incredibly well executed & shown, love how you use language & structure to show two completely different characters. also - LOVE the character names being so vastly different, a truly underrated writing technique that adds so much to the story, albeit unbeknownst to most readers.
2025-05-26 17:33:41
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Rein :
i like that this POV is coming from the 'gutter' because at the end of the day it makes sense for doubt and fear to start from the ground when the ground is what gets stomped on
2025-05-11 03:50:51
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Fishew :
social consciousness would fix Jonas
2025-05-28 19:27:04
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Zoe :
oof this hits hard. I relate so hard to the aliens. Just tryna survive. But so many see my existence as an affront to them.
2025-04-18 21:43:13
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Carrie Ann Schouwstra :
please keep going
2025-05-26 05:13:40
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Eponymous ♾️🌈 :
I finished it. I LOVE IT. Too much, honestly. It really shows a different perspective, and it can be seen how Jonas is blaming the wrong people. I’d love to know how much more you’re going to write!
2025-04-24 20:55:28
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maddyisunorginal0 :
This is incredible, you’re such an inspiration to me 🫶🏼
2025-04-18 16:12:24
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addie :
maya youre SO talented. i forgot how much i love your writing
2025-04-18 04:43:32
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Maya Al-Khzaee 🍉 :
This is phenomenallll
2025-04-27 06:20:20
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sabe :
i implore jonas to stop making assumptions based on nothing but fear
2025-06-17 21:24:10
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Cherry🐴 (the Dutch van-alyst) :
You are so talented, please never stop writing
2025-04-19 09:55:14
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Eponymous ♾️🌈 :
IT’S A SERIES?! This is going to be so good 💔
2025-04-24 20:50:52
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Party wit ari :
🥰🥰🥰
2025-05-26 12:20:36
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You Will Rock Books Shop :
sent you a DM🥳🥳
2025-04-20 13:57:10
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bowie :
if the aliens came in peace they should’ve stayed in the stars. WOW
2025-05-30 03:45:57
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