my hook is: noone wished me happy birthday today, but its alright, because it isnt my birthday
2025-04-26 23:58:21
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⭐️ava⭐️ :
I mean the first one was definitely hooking me in
2025-04-27 15:03:49
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Vish :
what do we write 🙏🥀
2025-04-27 00:00:47
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buangka📚🌸 :
This is why I'd rather do math than make an essay🥀
2025-04-27 01:48:00
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4leph :
grandma's hand line was actually good 😔
2025-04-27 15:37:13
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blacksheepinwolfsclothing :
Nahh that possum one was actually good although it’s supposed to be opossum not possum
2025-04-27 21:36:56
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⋆。‧˚ʚ🍓ɞ˚‧。⋆ :
One thing is that js bc someone has a wide vocabulary does not necessarily mean they used Ai yk? 😭 nth to do w this video, I just felt the need to say this
2025-04-27 05:55:50
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Dakota 🤍 :
Mine is “For most of my life, I felt like an afterthought in my own family. A ghost, moving through holidays and milestones with a smile that was never quite convincing enough.” And second one is “Some of the most important moments in my life weren’t loud or dramatic; they were the ones no one noticed.”
2025-05-19 03:46:21
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Kory‼️🫶 :
i did sadly rebel tummy time and now i have a semi-flat skull.
2025-04-27 00:31:02
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That.marvel.girl :
I’m applying to college in the fall. In an essay how personal should I go? I started mine and it’s really personal including like all my deepest inner thoughts. Is that too personal?
2025-04-27 03:06:48
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.hnxeybee 🌷 :
The second one was spitting bars tho 😭
2025-04-27 01:47:52
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liana <3 :
my essays had no hooks and i got into my dream school
2025-04-27 00:54:02
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incongnito :
I grew up, its a shame, is awful being a grown up, the carrusel never stops turning
2025-04-27 01:00:16
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Socks🌹 :
What am I even supposed to write about for college essays I’m a junior and I feel so lost
2025-04-28 03:03:42
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Ivonia :
My hook: Behind an uncontrollable smile isn’t always happiness, instead it’s a dripping faucet, small but incredibly annoying.
2025-05-06 17:25:15
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Ury Torres902 :
gonna keep using walter writes ai humanizer until they block it 😭
2025-04-29 08:00:00
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alawnzoh :
This is why English is the worst subject bro… it’s too subjective 😭💔 like what am I supPOSED to write bruh…
2025-06-22 04:24:38
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༺ 𝐇𝓲𝓵𝓵𝒂𝓻𝔂༻ :
The first two are so fire wdym
2025-05-02 03:48:11
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brg_mac :
Can u read a college essay u like
2025-04-27 21:46:22
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Jessica :
why are you reading mine
2025-05-26 09:44:41
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brady 🕺 :
mine was: ““Would you like a sticker?” I ask every kid over the obnoxious noise of a massive fan and the chaos of the biggest grocery store around.”
2025-04-28 07:08:41
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Beth :
I do not understand why this is so common in the US unless you’re doing a creative writing degree 😭 like I get it’s just the system but WHY would you need to do this for like. An accounting degree
2025-05-30 20:11:59
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anna :
can i just write about food ? haha.. no really
2025-04-27 00:22:27
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Carrie S Haines :
You should work in publishing.
2025-04-27 13:37:22
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R :
My hook is: “That night I could hear wailing, red and blue lights blaring outside the glass, I promised myself that this was the last time I would feel its comfort.” 💀💀💀💀
2025-04-27 01:26:44
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