i have a question, im writing a book (for fun, i dont plan on doing anything with it) its first person, shared between two characters, but i was wond-
2025-06-05 20:35:49
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l.mck57 :
Agree, and definitely need to be careful with simile and metaphor, because they can become overused, and mixed. I once had a student who used such a convoluted heroic metaphor that it was almost impossible to decipher. I think we as writers need to think carefully about when and how we use. We need to fundamentally understand how language works and then we can use it with greater effect.
2025-06-06 13:07:06
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ele (Taylor’s version) :
In my debut novel, I described the first time between my two protagonists as a game between a cat and a bird, which gradually becomes a hunt
2025-06-07 18:02:12
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。 jade ౨ৎ ⋆ 。˚ :
The struggle of using metaphors as a neurodivergent writer who thinks literally 😭
2025-07-31 09:33:20
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evangelineauthor :
Love this. What about a made up fantasy world. I’m guessing this would be a bit more difficult. Can’t link to things that exist only in the readers world to help explain what the scene looks like
2025-06-05 22:45:50
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Ellora_5 :
well I am confident in writing the description or scenario but literally I have no skill in dialogue 😭
2025-07-10 05:02:12
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Brent Johner 🇨🇦 Author :
Well done.
2025-06-05 18:06:24
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gabe | children's author :
man some of the best writers describe a scene/space with such a presence, like the AUTHOR is there reporting back to the reader what they're seeing. I LOVE how Anne Rice does this ❤️
2025-08-19 07:04:33
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WinceyP :
I noticed that the more powerful emotion you harness when you write it creates a living sentence when you read
2025-06-06 10:39:20
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the....leo1g1 :
one of my characters is named behemoth
I kinda just took some lines from the bible the behemoth
it's legally public domain right?
and I didn't copy paste it
2025-06-08 19:47:05
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★ AHU Writer ★ :
“The brown was gritty as soil, and none of that green could incubate a blade of warmth into that gaze.” - Proud of my hazel eyes description ✨
2025-06-23 07:57:44
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ᵀᴴᴱ ᶠᴼᴼᴸ :
I'm trying to write a short novel, but I have a problem with over describing certain events, other than what was described in the video, are there other ways to solve this issue?
2025-06-12 01:01:22
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Gweny‼️ :
thanks, I'll make sure to use this to help my story ❤
2025-06-05 21:55:14
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Kevin Barry O’Connor | Author :
Wow, this is awesome. Great job!
2025-06-17 07:44:40
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🍀!clover(Jesus's ver)🧟❾¾ ! :
how do you describe characters in the story?
2025-06-09 14:19:47
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The Red City | Author 📚 :
`good to note. Will refernce later
2025-07-02 11:00:11
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bon🌀🔆 :
earlyyy
2025-06-05 17:21:23
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bonsielikesskyzone :
What is a hedge fund manager?
2025-08-13 03:56:42
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🧸🪷 :
can someone read my scene
2026-05-01 10:37:07
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Phrinus :
You can't oversaturate the narration with these though, can you? It's going to make the reader feel nauseous. (Especially those with overactive imaginations. I speak from experience, it can get SO PAINFUL to try and get through these scenes, wondering why the author chose to describe a random rock in such a manner)
2025-07-06 22:47:42
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cintB23 :
😁
2025-09-08 04:56:58
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Imelda :
💜💜💜
2025-07-24 14:31:58
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sy :
😁
2025-09-20 16:05:35
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Juroška :
🫰
2025-06-08 07:46:25
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