A Space to Write (Maria)
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Thursday 05 June 2025 17:18:00 GMT
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bon🌀🔆 :
i have a question, im writing a book (for fun, i dont plan on doing anything with it) its first person, shared between two characters, but i was wond-
2025-06-05 20:35:49
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｡ jade ౨ৎ ⋆ ｡˚ :
The struggle of using metaphors as a neurodivergent writer who thinks literally 😭
2025-07-31 09:33:20
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ele (Taylor’s version) :
In my debut novel, I described the first time between my two protagonists as a game between a cat and a bird, which gradually becomes a hunt
2025-06-07 18:02:12
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l.mck57 :
Agree, and definitely need to be careful with simile and metaphor, because they can become overused, and mixed. I once had a student who used such a convoluted heroic metaphor that it was almost impossible to decipher. I think we as writers need to think carefully about when and how we use. We need to fundamentally understand how language works and then we can use it with greater effect.
2025-06-06 13:07:06
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WinceyP :
I noticed that the more powerful emotion you harness when you write it creates a living sentence when you read
2025-06-06 10:39:20
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evangelineauthor :
Love this. What about a made up fantasy world. I’m guessing this would be a bit more difficult. Can’t link to things that exist only in the readers world to help explain what the scene looks like
2025-06-05 22:45:50
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★ AHU Writer ★ :
“The brown was gritty as soil, and none of that green could incubate a blade of warmth into that gaze.” - Proud of my hazel eyes description ✨
2025-06-23 07:57:44
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Gweny‼️ :
thanks, I'll make sure to use this to help my story ❤
2025-06-05 21:55:14
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Brent Johner 🇨🇦 Author :
Well done.
2025-06-05 18:06:24
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Ellora_5 :
well I am confident in writing the description or scenario but literally I have no skill in dialogue 😭
2025-07-10 05:02:12
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gabe | children's author :
man some of the best writers describe a scene/space with such a presence, like the AUTHOR is there reporting back to the reader what they're seeing. I LOVE how Anne Rice does this ❤️
2025-08-19 07:04:33
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Valley :
love your earrings they're so cute😭
2025-06-21 07:50:06
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ᵀᴴᴱ ᶠᴼᴼᴸ :
I'm trying to write a short novel, but I have a problem with over describing certain events, other than what was described in the video, are there other ways to solve this issue?
2025-06-12 01:01:22
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the....leo1g1 :
one of my characters is named behemoth I kinda just took some lines from the bible the behemoth it's legally public domain right? and I didn't copy paste it
2025-06-08 19:47:05
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bonsielikesskyzone :
What is a hedge fund manager?
2025-08-13 03:56:42
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🍀!clover(Malcolm's wife)🧟! :
how do you describe characters in the story?
2025-06-09 14:19:47
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🧸🪷 :
can someone read my scene
2026-05-01 10:37:07
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Phrinus :
You can't oversaturate the narration with these though, can you? It's going to make the reader feel nauseous. (Especially those with overactive imaginations. I speak from experience, it can get SO PAINFUL to try and get through these scenes, wondering why the author chose to describe a random rock in such a manner)
2025-07-06 22:47:42
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LiftLore :
👌
2025-06-08 18:04:17
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Imelda :
💜💜💜
2025-07-24 14:31:58
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Ezzy (StarRiot) :
i thought about this. probably work best in a romance. when one describes things around them with their significant other like "The breeze feels soft like his hair after a shower"
2025-06-06 01:59:44
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Erik Sweet✍🏼Powers Collide :
love these tools. Personification is another i like using. Combining all three at once is when the magic happens. The grass was as green as its flourishing growth, young and brimming with potential.
2025-06-11 10:35:14
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bon🌀🔆 :
earlyyy
2025-06-05 17:21:23
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Kundalini Yoga with Yogigems :
as pink as a hedge-fund manager's shirt - love it!
2025-06-08 18:32:47
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Kevin Barry O’Connor | Author :
Wow, this is awesome. Great job!
2025-06-17 07:44:40
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The Red City | Author 📚 :
`good to note. Will refernce later
2025-07-02 11:00:11
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cintB23 :
😁
2025-09-08 04:56:58
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sy :
😁
2025-09-20 16:05:35
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youdontknowme :
it absolutely sucks for me because I tend to write in thoughts and feelings instead of pictures 😭 maybe it's because when I read books, I don't see the pictures either
2025-06-12 18:09:45
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Nice to Si you :
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2025-06-08 07:46:25
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