Where are the sparks, the action the drama. Sound as if you tell a friend about a day... You are a mentalist, incorporate and enhance the story line...
2025-07-31 18:59:30
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Sam Harding :
For an unfinished story, it’s so captivating Rachel.
2025-06-12 03:23:02
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Natalia :
You write beautifully; it depicts your strong self reflection as well as intra and inter-analysis of yourself and the world around you; it truly moved me to tears!
2025-06-12 03:44:49
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mr. wapo :
Some people wander their whole lives without ever finding what you two once had. I hope you meet again. I hope you find each other, and yourselves, once more. The hopeless romantic in me is fully invested. Good luck!
2025-06-12 03:06:40
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1999Nissan200sx :
This was incredibly captivating, I could FEEL it in a way I didn't expect. I've never been to any of the places you mention, but it was like watching a movie in my mind. Thank you for sharing this, it was powerful.
2025-06-12 13:23:26
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user5281071025942 :
Honestly it sounds quite finished to me. It conveys an interesting idea. And the last line hits pretty hard, summing up everything before it. I don’t know if you’re looking to dive deeper into the neuroscience side of things for this article, but if the goal is to sort of write a neuroscience guided philosophy on life, I think you nailed it.
2025-06-12 03:47:33
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jasonwittmuss2 :
I love it, but the line analogy I think sounds a little off. you are giving this incredibly interwoven story, and a line seems too flat to describe it
2025-06-13 22:55:22
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DrRachelBarr :
Oh yeah also, follow me on Substack, link in bio 😅 Otherwise, I love suggestions and thoughts and feedback
2025-06-12 02:29:55
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Lilith :
I want to read your book, even though every piece I hear from you, makes me cry in a different ways 😭😭😭
2025-06-12 09:34:56
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BUDA :
You’re great, I enjoyed listening to you. I’m looking forward to reading your book❤️
2025-06-12 04:54:48
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cwb701 :
I’ve read this. Love it
2025-06-13 01:51:58
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codiejo0 :
😂😂😂
2025-06-17 07:33:13
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zack :
dr rachel, progress with the math course????
2025-06-12 02:36:27
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Hakimitus :
that's like a perfect finish. this is divine, profound, real and honest. it resonates quite deeply
2025-06-13 10:59:31
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gusfickett :
Cool nails and style
2025-06-23 08:36:28
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itrfjie756 :
You have wonderful way with words, so much so that I felt your pang of longing and conflict even among the use of ‘glittertits’. Edinburgh is a magical place on its own, even without our lives imposed on it.
2025-06-13 01:58:41
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Jaime Montoya :
Beautiful story 🍀
2025-06-12 03:07:19
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O Ninja Criativo :
where is the subtitles? 🥲
2025-06-12 14:37:41
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Bears :
I recommend reading up a little on world lines 👍
2025-06-12 11:52:05
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moepar1 :
Don’t forget to rest
2025-06-12 11:26:15
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Vigil :
this is utterly heartwarming, devastating but so full of wisdom and promising. little did I expect to find such a piece of insight in life today. this will be kept, remembered and used as torch in dark hours. thank you very much
2025-07-29 15:36:53
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Michel Leblanc :
You write beautifully:)
2025-06-12 19:12:05
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AnachronousLee :
This is a beautiful example of quantum entanglement across the years; space and time...stunning poetic prose to let us glimpse what perhaps love truly is on a Quantum level.
2025-06-15 04:24:16
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Victoria Anne :
Beautiful, poetic, wistful, powerful, fragile. Loved listening to this. You’ll get there. Don’t force it✨
2025-06-12 06:25:16
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Inconsistently_Consistent :
Sounds finished to me. It’s a beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing it
2025-06-13 10:50:30
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Fran :
Hi Dr! I admire you. Sending all my love from Argentina 🥰
2025-06-12 02:49:17
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Floontzzz :
“The meaning of life is just a line traced through time”… and time is a thought. So the meaning of life is just thought based, unreal ?
2025-06-13 20:48:31
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Krompus :
That was beautiful, thank you for sharing. Loved seeing the editor grumble at the very end! :D
2025-06-15 18:25:12
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aarrkk :
Thank You. 👍
2025-06-18 22:17:26
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marc10110101🇳🇱 :
indeed, it is not finished!!🤔
2025-06-14 23:58:52
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Mr Hues :
Ahhh, I don't know. An "indifferent" universe? Really? It seems a cold and empty space to see such a story told. I know, you're a materialist, tied to rational explicable things, Dr Rachel Bar, neuroscientist. Does the rising song of the lark not make you wonder? Did his grey crown not make you question? There must be more to life than this?
2025-06-14 03:18:37
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Mr Hues :
When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.”
2025-06-14 03:06:08
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Mr Hues :
Have you thought about chopping up your sentence structure to "show, not tell" a little more? Making emotion the primary hook, grounded in the physical "We were eating jerk chicken with our fingers, I was in love. Across the wide Atlantic a thousand miles away a new life lay paused but my heart was held in Bristol and my fingers were sticky...
2025-06-14 02:55:06
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Sebamzz :
thank you for sharing
2025-08-11 06:48:57
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Idun :
You write beautifully!! I'm excited about your book, and now this... I'd love to read much more from you❤️
2025-06-16 10:47:21
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abril_p_c :
Hermoso 🥹❤️🩹
2025-08-01 02:23:31
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NeonKnighto42 :
Sounds great so far. Got your Substack because of it!😁😁
2025-07-31 21:10:48
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gilly :
it's the connection of the soul,mind and joint experience xxx
2025-06-23 19:26:42
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Oisín :
This is beautiful😀. I’m neurodivergent & my story is still unfolding and it’s challenging. You’re much smarter than me, you are, but I’m sure many other neurodivergent people have asked themselves, at certain points in their lives, questions like:
What if it was because of my mental health condition that I lost THE ideal partner? That thought really hurts. For me, it’s a constant battle…😣
English is not my first language, so please excuse my mistakes.
I just wanted to tell you that across the ocean, we do love, admire, and acknowledge you and your uniqueness. You have friends on the other side of the ocean, sending you kind words ❤️
2025-06-24 16:37:37
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Chris :
as a visual artist, this made me genuinely envy the written medium. thank you.
2025-06-25 14:51:22
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2025-06-25 22:34:39
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Larisa Психолог КПТ Супервизор :
Russia Saint-Petersburg here
2025-06-25 22:34:59
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Larisa Психолог КПТ Супервизор :
look at me
2025-06-25 22:35:34
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Larisa Психолог КПТ Супервизор :
thank you
2025-06-25 22:35:46
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Larisa Психолог КПТ Супервизор :
thanks
2025-06-25 22:36:10
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Marley 🇬🇧 :
If the Neurosicence doesn’t work out for you, you definitely have writing to fall back on- utterlly compelling story 🤯🤯🤯
2025-07-31 08:02:19
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Larisa Психолог КПТ Супервизор :
You know, I would like to visit your place work
2025-06-25 22:37:50
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Riiko Samuli Muje :
My brothers daughter studiet in Edinburgh univercity. Christ Christo Kristus
2025-07-13 00:41:05
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