odelia 🐞
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✨CADENCE✨ :
my hook is "I am the light in others lives because I know what it's like for the light to be taken out of mine." is that ok? 😭🙏
2025-07-01 07:00:14
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Alex :
My hook was “I realized I’ve lived my entire life as a Walmart scanner”
2025-06-29 14:19:20
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Miguel Gomez336 :
My hook is “I wasn’t born until six years in my life ” I had amnesia and dementia from an autoimmune disease and had to relearn everything.
2025-07-11 05:11:57
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nishibow :
what if my hook is “I’ve never had a dad.”
2025-06-19 10:27:32
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lyn_kg8 :
My hook is “I hate birthday cards” I genuinely have no clue if its good but I'm going for it
2025-06-29 11:33:58
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mvvvvv838 :
Whenever I try to write my essay, my mind goes blank. Do you have any exercises/strategies that you used to brainstorm?
2025-06-17 21:02:51
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ari🪽 :
CRITIQUE MINE ANYONE PLEASE. “What do you do when the man who taught you how to ride a bike claims that there are voices coming from the vents?” - dad got diagnosed with psychosis junior year
2025-07-22 02:14:50
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evelyn.b008 :
my hook is “tuck, thread, pull.” and the essay is a metaphore about how my life has been like the imperfections of hand-crocheting a blanket
2025-07-04 03:19:05
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️ :
I think I will start mines with a quote from the musical Hamilton [proud]
2025-06-22 23:55:51
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xxtwiiliight :
“Your doing great sweetie” its a place holder until I find something else 🙂↕️
2025-06-19 04:32:24
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niyah <3🍉 :
One of my hooks are, “I held my face as I felt that stinging, throbbing pain running through me. I had been slapped. No, not by anyone, but by the phrase, ‘and it was all a dream.’”
2025-06-19 20:47:31
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abbyyyy :
“When I was 6 I drew on a piece of paper” I drew out my business logo that I have been running for 5 years 🤭
2025-06-20 03:45:48
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marc :
“hold up ain’t you nathaniel b?”
2025-08-01 17:27:29
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jeepshow21 :
Should I mention EC’s in my essay? Because I see some people do and some don’t
2025-06-19 05:24:49
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bLrb :
My hook is “It just wouldn’t go away” which refers to a dermal condition that inspired me to take a med major
2025-06-22 03:42:14
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sydney🐞 :
(i havent started yet) but i think i want my hook to be “my hands are the windows to my soul” i wanted to use my own spin on a common phrase and then write about an uncommon approach to a common topic (being quiet)
2025-06-18 17:02:44
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pao🎸 :
“I grew up in a neighborhood most people passed without slowing down” ???? SOMEONE LMK
2025-07-24 18:41:10
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not_rj29 :
Do you have any services , i would like some feedback for my essay
2025-06-19 02:29:55
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love, kio💋 :
my hook is “There is a moment; not even a moment—more like a silence that lives between moments, where the world tilts.” and my essay is about my SA and how literature and music helped me find myself. is that good chat i’m scared
2025-08-01 04:35:30
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Lucy🤘 :
My hook is“I was the only kid at recess told not to run.” It’s about being held back as a child due to health issues such as JDM and SVT. Does this sound like a good hook??
2025-07-30 00:49:32
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kait ☀️ :
my hook might be; who are you supposed to be if your told “don’t be you” (IF THIS GOOD???)
2025-07-21 04:48:40
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david :
I’ve always said to everyone to just be authentic and write about something that genuinely means a lot to you. I wrote mine about joining my sport (that I’m not even doing in college) & I genuinely believe that essay was the tipping point for the more selective schools I got into
2025-06-18 15:55:25
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ems 🫧💐 :
im thinking of starting off with “my pointe shoes are dead.”
2025-07-05 03:18:49
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🖤🎼Talaya🎼🖤 :
my hook feels kinda corny but it goes well into what I'm gonna talk abt my hook is "I am Glad I was born into a poor family" it might catch attention and they will get curious as to what I mean
2025-06-26 15:26:40
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gracie ⋆✴︎˚｡⋆ :
idk if mine is weird but its about how my grandma had these rainbow polka dot bedsheets and how i noticed that there was one red dot in a sea of blue and green dots and how i felt different from other people cause i was quiet but how being quiet led me to being observant and understanding people and the world in a different way
2025-07-03 18:06:47
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