Holy mother of God. The slow realization that overtook me. The generational trauma at the core. This is incredible. I'm speechless.
2025-07-02 06:35:16
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S.E. McPherson | Fantasy ✍️📖 :
the way it makes you *feel* trapped in the story, long after you know what's going to happen. god, this is good.
2025-07-02 11:24:06
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Jacx🎉🐇 :
I thought this was about the g o v at first
2025-07-02 07:04:32
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jools :
I was hooked from the beginning. this is fantastic
2025-07-02 02:53:41
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Ethan :
You made 30 minutes feel like 10 what the hell
2025-07-02 11:00:23
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emily :
have you ever thought about being a screenwriter
2025-07-02 05:36:53
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statement from yulissa escobar :
The house being only prepared for external threats and not for the internal one made a LOT click for me
2025-07-02 16:24:58
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alina kim :
incredible how even though you revealed what was going to happen part of the way through, i couldn’t help but keep hoping for them to escape until the very end
2025-07-02 06:37:50
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Macaw Dantalian ! :
This is so good but hearing “the window was nonchalant about the whole thing” caught me so off guard
2025-07-02 11:04:34
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spotted gecko :
the father saying hes upset because the house, THEN because almost losing his son and never because 70 children just died horrifyingly in his house is chilling
2025-07-03 04:41:58
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🌸Valentine🌸 :
Many people think this is political or climate but I felt like Darren and our main guy and Bruce are all the burning house in some way.
2025-07-02 13:02:01
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t :
what do you mean that was half an hour?? I was hooked the entire time. exquisite writing and stoytelling.
2025-07-02 05:26:00
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Samara🪰 :
my attention span is so back
2025-07-02 13:57:56
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Drew Strate :
this is perfect. I love the narrative framing. "i know this book and its ending.. but the end still approaches even with my terrible knowledge"
2025-07-02 15:10:51
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GillieBean :
I didn’t realize this was 30 mins long until the very end omg the storytelling was absolutely captivating
2025-07-02 15:08:47
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vicXyy🦑🐇 :
stacy the house is on fucking FIRE
2026-07-21 16:23:04
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NeuroticalExperience :
The comedic wit in this writing is incredible, and what’s even more incredible is just how excellently you weave it into a genuine, serious story. There’s just so much here that is incredible, but that in particular strikes me as noteworthy.
2025-07-02 04:33:18
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nopenotfeelinit :
"You get what you pay for" while staring into the camera hit me like a ton of bricks 😯
2025-07-02 18:52:42
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carter 🐏 :
the creeping feeling of dread that the fathers interview gives is UNREAL. you can see the pieces fall into place one by one and its AWFUL. incredible writing had me hooked the whole time
2025-07-02 07:13:05
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mercurialcomet :
The subtle hints early on and the payoffs later are chilling, omg
2025-07-02 12:53:02
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(๑ᵔ⤙ᵔ๑)₊˚⊹♡ :
The house being optimized for external threats and the father purposefully ignoring active warning signs from the house is a HAUNTING metaphor. The other people being oblivious 99% of the time also relfects their own intense focus on themselves and their issues, buzz, and development. In any other case that focus wouldn't be harmful but this was the time where everyone needed to be part of something bigger. To see beyond the smoke. There's other metaphors I can't articulate here. This is so well written.
2025-07-03 05:30:45
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Lexi Duncan :
This is extremely powerful. Flawless delivery.
2025-07-02 02:31:33
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abbi.a26 :
“You get what you pay for” is an absolutely vicious line to pepper in at the end there, this is SO wonderful
2025-07-02 15:43:52
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