@sketchyfish7: I’m not living some parts but I can’t think of ways to make it look better #artstyle #digitalpainting #drawing #eatercolorart #procreate
it looks like its daytime while the bottom looks light night time and I think that's because the whole top of the painting is bright there's not many deep shadows at all there's the doorway and that's it
2025-08-26 03:59:11
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Gar :
i think some cooler shadow just under the plank to add a bit more depth, nothing too dark to disreact from the night sky, but other than that i love! i’d put this on my wall as is 😋
2025-08-26 10:13:46
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Somnus :
shading. It depends on where the light is coming from, but the shadow will have a big impact on your drawing. dont be afraid to overdo it!
2025-08-26 08:34:44
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Jules The Reaper. Exe :
Idk if this is your style, but tone wise it is pretty flat with little contrast, id take a photo and play around until you get a result you like and can reference!
2025-08-26 00:10:19
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selkie :
maybe add more weight to the lines to differentiate the characters from the bg, its blending in a bit
2025-08-26 01:10:19
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...EnoughSaid :
I think more shading - it looks like it’s supposed to go very far down but now it seems short and flat - plus I think making the building in the corner darker would help with framing as well
2025-08-26 04:53:27
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cc :
could you make the shadows darker near the bird man’s head? my eyes kind of glazed over him since he’s a similar color to the sails(?)
2025-08-26 02:16:28
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story ꨄ :
add more saturation to the parts of characters so they stand out more, more line weight to the as well id say, just really anything to get them to pop out of the illustration more. beautiful beautiful work
2025-08-26 03:31:20
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kenzieservera :
put a bit of the red in his tie somewhere lower in the drawing, helps balance things to the eye! old trick my art teacher taught me
2025-08-26 00:23:49
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capp :
literally none this is so cool 🥹 maybe with contrast or lighting ?
2025-08-26 00:08:33
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BunY0n :
Maybe darken the buildings a little to bring the focus more towards the ppl
2025-08-26 00:15:42
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maybe.kb :
idk a frame? looks perfect to me
2025-08-26 04:00:11
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rat :
I have a fear of heights and looking at this made my stomach hurt so I think you’re good lmaooo
2025-08-26 01:42:46
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Hello 👋🏻 :
Maybe a bit more shadow or just something to add to the depth of the actual “fall” (idk what to call it) but I really don’t know cause it’s so amazing
2025-08-26 22:36:00
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Batman :
The right guys knee is hovering over the abyss😼😼😼
2025-08-28 10:35:19
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nora :
this literally looks straight out of a book illustration its so cool
2025-08-26 02:13:18
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Mae 🌬⋆。𖦹°⭒˚ :
SORRY FOR EVEN LOOKING AT ART SUPPLIES
2025-08-26 03:10:26
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Aesira★ :
THIS IS BREATHTAKING[happy] The only thing I noticed maybe is that the characters blend a little into the background? I'd just thicken the outlines a bit BUT OMY GOD IT LOOKS GORGEOUS
2025-08-26 00:12:28
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ᯓ★lotus :
Cool lighting overlays? They usually help me but I agree with that comment about line weight so the characters pop out but your art is super darling as always!
2025-08-28 15:21:36
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brynne :
make the bottom of the body a little smaller since the top is so big
2025-08-26 03:02:25
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Vanillasacs :
Maybe the lighting? Don’t huge clock towers emit light? Perhaps you could add a glow and some shadows? A nice yellow glow then a cooler shadow , with a cool blue light from the moon at the bottom? I already like what you have going on here and I hope my suggestion helps . I’ll try to add an image later of what I suggested because I’m pretty dookie at describing things lmao
2025-08-26 13:01:26
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Gus gus :
The bird guy kinda blends with the background browns I’d say amp up his shadows or change up the browns a bit. It looks lovely.
2025-08-26 02:56:27
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Eva :
What brush do you use for your lineart!
2025-08-28 16:57:16
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🫶 king lesbian 🫶 :
take a picture of it, turn the picture into noir or grayscale, and see how your values look. brightest and darks will draw the viewers eye, maybe add some light coming from behind the man from the clock so that the pit at the bottom doesn’t steal all the attention
2025-08-26 12:10:52
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