@writingwithsheridan: Like that is NOT THE REASON!! WHY DO YOU THINK SPARKLING WINE IS MADE WITH A TANK OF CO2 #worldbuilding #writertok #writingabook the reason why: Champagne is a toponym, and the word itself would not exist without the region of “Champagne” in France on our human earth world. In a secondary fantasy world, ie not our human-earth world, the region of champagne France does not exist (haha unlessssss??), so therefore, the wine by that name wouldn’t exist either. Sorry. You can do what you want, but do it knowing it will yank readers who are educated ab it out of your manuscript.

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victoriaaveyard
VictoriaAveyard :
This is my personal pet peeve JUST CALL IT SPARKLING WINE IF THERE IS NO FRANCE
2025-09-21 08:16:29
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saintswrld22
big homie saint :
part of me feels like i’m in in english class with my hand straight up😂 “because why is france in asgard!!”
2025-09-19 07:33:41
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astromechas
astromechas :
I can excuse champagne, but I once read a book where a character said, “You threw me under the bus” like BUS??? In my fantasy book???
2025-09-20 08:29:37
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historyslut69
Katie Kathryn Margaret :
I DNF’d a book because a character had a French braid in a world without FRANCE.
2025-09-19 08:38:02
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crescentfire
Cress :
See my logic is always: this is a translation, so our word for champagne would be the closest equivalent to their word for it!
2025-09-19 05:14:32
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cpt.creampuff
Creampuff :
well you see you're actually reading an English translation of that fantasy worlds language. and the word champagne is just the closest equivalent of what's the fantasy language uses
2025-09-19 14:59:01
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happyhobo39
Happy Hobo Bird :
This is me when they have some sort of modern technology because the author didn’t want to use what would be “period accurate” (looking at you SJM with modern plumbing), but we’re expected to believe it’s still a relatively medieval world
2025-09-19 12:37:13
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gmoorhen
gmoorhen :
whenever I read "champagne" in a portal fantasy I think about the fairies sneaking over to France every so often to stock up on crates of Bollinger
2025-09-19 09:12:38
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lobokvonzuben
VonZuben :
Is this selective, though? Don't include Champagne, fine, but is everything off limits when the etymology comes from a real place?
2025-09-19 21:36:24
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drawbridge23
Sunpillarmadillo :
Fun fact: the effect of carbonation can be recreated without any kind of technology, using pearls and a highly acidic liquid! No word on how it tastes tho
2025-09-19 12:38:52
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digifootprintexpress
a :
Imagine creating a fantasy world and Fr*nce exists in it 😔💔
2025-09-20 20:52:04
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carrotwithnocake
Cow enthusiast :
My favorite of these is tuxedo!
2025-09-19 15:10:36
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n3on_grav3tones
Neon Gravestones :
so what you're saying is I just need to make sure I have a region based on France in my worldbuilding that has a city names champagne right. right.
2025-09-19 18:23:59
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kboha
kb :
what kinda lame ass fantasy setting doesnt have fermentation locked down
2025-09-20 02:35:34
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diinadii
Nadia :
Amren is doing a jigsaw puzzle in one of the ACOTAR books and I still think about that. They have jigsaws in fantasy land??
2025-09-28 19:59:08
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third_crow
third_crow :
LMAO do they think beer is made sith co2 too???
2025-09-19 12:33:48
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russell.ringo
taylor :
i get so annoyed when they use our months. U HAVE JULIUS CAESAR IN THIS WORLD????
2025-09-25 15:08:27
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riepp90
KM :
No bc when I was reading crescent city on MIDGARD and they kept saying “unEARTHly”
2025-09-19 20:03:07
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vnmaddox0009
V.N. Maddox - Fantasy Author :
I mean, technically you’re correct, but I feel like most people don’t know that champagne is from a certain region, just like indigo is related to India and turquoise related to Turkey. Describing FantasyEquivalentOfChampagne or FantasyEquivalentOfTurquoise at length might actually take some people out of your work more than just using the word might. Not everyone overthinks like we do.
2025-09-19 22:46:12
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pixiefernwood
Pixie Fernwood :
there is a natural way to create carbonation. I can't remember what it's called. something bug. the fizz is not as sharp as CO2, but still very much there. I'd have to ask my husband if I wanted exacts, as he's made it before.
2025-09-19 17:13:39
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camomillaerose
annie 🍂🍄 :
it's even funnier when they base a book on medieval europe and they write about people throwing tomatoes as a sign of protest and eating corn and potatoes for a meal, like girl . those things weren't in europe before 1492
2025-11-11 01:38:23
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chopperdlopper
W :
thats not even true?? we have been creating carbonation through fermentation for literal millenia, and many 2nd world fantasy stories take place in a "medieval" time period
2025-09-20 08:14:41
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witch.of.suburbia
🌀willowwisp🌀 :
i literally spent at least an hour agonizing how to refer to madeira wine in a fantasy work
2025-09-23 23:41:29
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micah.isthatguy
this guy gets it 🔻 :
me, completely rewriting a scene bc i cant figure out a non-scientific way to describe an "adam's apple" 😔
2025-10-19 08:18:18
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