Mr. Kleba 👓
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Im.Tdub :
If you got a 1100 or lower SAT is it worth uploading
2025-10-21 17:13:43
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i :
i just submitted to harvard and princeton and now i see this…
2026-01-01 20:18:09
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gyatasorus :
Isn’t #1 literally one the prompts tho 😭😭
2025-10-08 02:58:08
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t.yak2 :
No way. That makes it sound like you have no idea what you want to do. It ends leaving a negative thought. Colleges today want students that have a passion. Students that have already taken on responsibilities and challenges.
2025-10-07 18:43:17
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gianna :
am i supposed to end with a struggle and say what i’ll bring to the campus or??
2025-10-08 00:00:22
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College Calm with Talya :
I agree, it's like an epilogue!!
2025-10-21 12:59:44
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leilanichang7 :
What if the prompt asked you what you learned?
2025-12-26 22:22:36
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kayla :
if my whole paper is about a struggle and then i decide to end with a struggle, won’t it just display me as weak and more so as “hey feel bad for me and let me in”
2025-10-07 19:51:11
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chanel !! :
i have #1 in my conclusion, but i think it feels right with the context of the rest of essay. i’m not completely sure though
2025-10-08 00:26:01
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abiinmyhead :
i’m ngl…this is completely contradictory to what other teachers say like what😭😭
2025-10-24 23:10:21
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Destinie :
My daughter is writing how her cousins suicide has changed how she deals with her own mental health… should she change it?
2025-12-02 13:24:45
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benny🥭 :
Thank you so much this is a tuff video btw 🔥🔥🔥🔥
2025-10-29 13:05:32
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margaretbejaranow :
I don’t agree. My senior has overcome some huge obstacles and has leaned so much that she’s a mature young adult with more life experiences than. Some people in their 30’s. She doesn’t conform. She doesn’t care what other teens do and it’s a huge accomplishment- sure she has room to grow but man what a shame to not share how she’s become so confident in being an individualist.
2025-10-27 22:19:56
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𝓜𝓮𝓻𝓲 𖣂 :
Damn imma have to rewrite the whole thing
2025-10-23 04:42:32
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quando carter :
Yall been blind leading us nowadays
2025-10-24 00:30:53
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Hildie :
honestly my daughter wrote about her seborrheic dermatitis and picking the scabs on her scalp. it was hilarious and completely out there. i thought she was nuts but she got into or wait listed at every school she applied to academically.
2025-10-09 21:59:29
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Eli :
How about if they are inspired by this people or this people motivated them through out their lives. They are still not allow to talk about them?
2025-10-20 17:33:00
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Im.Tdub :
What if I said my goals or plans for after college or even goals that I need college for?
2025-10-21 05:39:49
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FlamingBliss :
By any chance, do you have a business where my son can send you his essay for critique and feedback
2025-10-11 00:12:29
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PlayGirlFarti :
Oh, so we supposed to end the essay saying that we’re beginning to learn about this thing
2025-10-16 15:12:59
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ASHU :
The café mirror cleared. The man left. I stayed. I wrote my name in the condensation and watched the letters fade slower this time. The struggle is not over, but the hand that writes is steadier now. My journey is not a problem I have solved, but a language I am learning to speak—one that translates personal pain into a universal question. I no longer seek a formula to fix a body that was never broken. Instead, I will pursue the science that asks who is being left out of the equation altogether. I am coming to your university not for a final answer, but with a fundamental question: How do we build a world where every mind belongs? this is my conclusion
2025-10-13 09:48:31
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holly102519 :
Shoot! Ha my daughter just finished her draft and it ends with #1. Help! Lol
2025-10-07 12:25:43
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peter_the_great_fan :
I disagree, any ending can be well if done correctly, these 2 "deadly mistakes" may just be harder to execute, although i dont think the 1st one you mentioned is even that hard to pull off well
2025-10-08 17:19:53
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cjbsocool1 :
Is immigrant stories okay? I am an immigrant myself and people keep saying to not write about that
2025-10-08 11:46:16
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maggie :
for #2 my concluding sentence is: It feels full circle to have done this for these kids, my STEM stars, as I hope to ignite the same fascination that will last them a lifetime.
2025-10-09 06:42:33
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