@milowinterwrites: Today's critique topic: my characters sleep too much (rookie mistake) Art by @Nokkipo #milowinter #theworldofgardian #BookTok #audrawinter #ageofscorpius

The World of Gardian
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kapendrake
K.A. Pendrake :
Pretty sure the issue is with the lack of refunds and transparency, writing a bad book isn’t an issue it’s just when you take money for pre orders there’s a responsibility there. However, I want to say I’m rooting for you and happy to see you are still working on this.
2025-11-25 22:53:25
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ufclover1122
Ufclover1122 :
Wait I actually respect this- lean into it, taken accountability, humourous— fair play to you! I’ll check out the second edition
2025-12-02 08:48:18
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peachhhglow
spgpch :
I’m actually genuinely invested in seeing how this goes, and I think I’d like to give the second book a chance when it comes out
2025-11-24 22:51:04
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christianhavok
Wester :
Sauli needs to retire as well.
2026-02-24 06:19:38
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miranda.writing
Miranda Lenwest :
okay I love that you're at the point where you can lean in on it and make jokes! I am excited to see the next edition!
2025-11-25 03:45:38
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jen_a_f
Jen AF :
I like that you have a sense of humor about this saga!! I’m sure it’s not easy
2025-11-25 00:54:33
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cenupe
Gonza123 :
tu puedes
2025-11-25 05:42:36
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lonseb.askalon
LonSeb :
Is this the official account? If so, wow that’s great sense of humour. And honestly, if you have the same attitude towards reworking the book, you can really make it. All the best!
2026-01-05 08:39:10
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c.h.degosserieauthor
c.h.degosserieauthor :
My characters sleep too little I think. They are traumatised and have lack of sleep and have to fight to survive 💀
2025-12-21 23:28:54
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pop.lock5
Pop Lock :
😇😇😇😊😊😊
2025-11-25 06:03:04
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liz.la.librera
Liz la librera :
🔥
2026-01-05 19:15:15
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