She is a not a bad writer, but she lacks some basic fiction-writing skills; for example, “show don’t tell.” Right away, we meet the English teacher - and he monologues his entire history, motivations, desires to class, instead of these being carefully explored/revealed to the reader through character-driven plot points. That kind of exposition falls flat for me.
2026-01-28 13:16:20
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111hannnah :
i was expecting this book to fill the void that my dark vanessa left me with but i fear no book will ever compare 😕
2026-01-28 04:48:59
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Excedrin :
I wanna see her growth as a writer.
2026-01-28 09:10:38
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auspicious stone :
oh god I thought it was another memoir I was getting ready to launch into orbit
2026-01-28 04:44:05
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glow_wormb :
Wasn’t there some kind of controversy with this cover?
2026-01-28 05:42:50
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Ryuk Is god :
2026-01-28 03:34:06
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natasha 🦈 :
I enjoyed the book, I think she captured the teenage girl mind so well. I wish there was more imagery, and she could’ve slowed down in some parts for emphasis
2026-01-28 17:07:17
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andie :
I enjoyed half his age, but I found the prose style to be a little redundant in some places. the jacket copy is a great example, where it opens with a list of adjectives to describe waldo. there were a number of places in the novel where this cadence was used and at a certain point it lost its punch
2026-01-28 13:39:17
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will(ow) :
i really WANTED to like it, but it was so much shock factor and not much healing afterward? idk i loved the shopping addiction and aspects that related to her mother, but omfg the end was so disappointing!
2026-01-28 19:48:22
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Anankha Rai :
Tell the Bees talking about off broadway theater? I’m so sat
2026-01-28 15:20:57
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Nat 🏳️🌈 :
i got to chapter 15 in my first sitting and was disappointed with the writing :/ BUT it’s a first novel, and i really like the concept and i see the vision
2026-02-01 00:54:04
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immaterialgir1 :
After reading my dark vanessa, half his age felt so undercooked i almost hated it
2026-01-29 16:40:41
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Samantha Harper :
I enjoyed the book I have so many thoughts - she’s great a visual storytelling and evoking deep set emotions. Sometimes it can get bogged down by its own purpose- but I appreciated the book so much.
2026-01-29 04:28:14
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berrybie :
damn you read fast! I love it
2026-01-28 04:32:30
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Erica Dzwon :
See also: Miller’s Girl 😬
2026-01-28 04:42:52
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Toronto Transplant :
Slightly related, but the way you analyze social attributes is making me consider getting an MA in Sociology. (Compliment)
2026-01-28 16:24:24
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israacore :
unrelated but are u watching singles inferno??? i want to hear ur takes on the cast soo bad
2026-01-28 12:29:00
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allthingsbeautyandnice :
You should post on benable, there’s so many great book rec lists there
2026-01-28 17:45:31
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(marble) :
It was so bad 😭
2026-01-28 07:57:23
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Mad Reads 📚 :
I have been having such a hard time putting into words how I felt about this book and you hit the nail on the head
2026-01-28 05:13:26
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Riley Jo :
Your description of The Disappear reminds me of the marriage at the heart of Anatomy of a Fall (2023) another entry in the Pathetic Man canon. It also has two artists where the woman is the breadwinner and the man deeply resents her for it. Their big fight and Sandra Hüller’s monologue taking him down fundamentally altered my self image and how I approach my life
2026-01-29 04:05:06
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mo :
Amy & Isabelle by Elizabeth Strout deals with this subject matter in a very serious yet quietly upsetting way. I highly recommend it!!!
2026-01-28 13:17:13
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dani :
i just started half his age
2026-01-30 16:01:49
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It’s Not Me :
Finished half his age today after starting it yesterday! It was so good and thought provoking.
2026-01-29 22:33:14
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Mels on wheels :
Been watching u for years but too scared to click follow bc I don’t want u to drop off my fyp 🥹
2026-01-28 06:45:20
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