@arg0nauthyung: #stitch with @Arum Natzorkhang poetry #plato #sappho #ovid #philosophytiktok

gabazoclaxaso :

Arum won but yours was really good as well. Best internet beef ever

dacoda :

MY GOAT. Reading in a collected tone meanwhile Arum singing with layered audio. I’m crine bro 😭

iktim :

his domain, his choice of format and structure, over 150x more following and we still winning. i know who my goat is

logofftheapp :

I can't even troll this is genuinly peak 😭

TACO :

hjfhmdmyd :

Even though I sometimes do not agree with some of your takes, I much preferred your work, Hyung. I feel like the other dude’s was a bit pretentious. I’m not really sure why I feel that way, though. At the end of the day, art is all about feelings, right? You have my vote.

️jb :

I'm a larper but that one stanza was crazy bro

14 :

I was gonna say Nietszche spoke of this …but he’s never written this peak😭🥀

︎ ￴ :

i hope you win bro🔥

juanplugabraxas :

This is so ahh

gakit86 :

It doesn't rhyme 💀

Chlorine :

why did I think you were acutally going to write in ancient Greek 🙏🙏 anyways hope you win twin

Gabe :

I'm a poetry noob but for what it's worth, I liked it.

Apathyandcookies :

@Apathyandcookies:It was good. His was considerably better. but he was also the one who chose the format and subject. so you started from a disadvantage. As a teacher I would have given you both A's. His was the one that would have gotten submitted to a literary journal.

𝐂𝐎𝐑𝐕𝐔𝐒 𝐂𝐎𝐑𝐀𝐗 :

phontom :

wow this is a lovely piece

big_regiii :

Bro, you went up against a linguist and you did damn well. This was the best Internet beef because it birthed two beautiful poetic works.

afegaz :

Arum has more historicity. Hyung's really slaps too, the roundness and solemnity is really bright and feels beautiful but i think Arum's is more dearing and his exercise of layering excels. However, i think you guys should keep challenging each other with new criteria in the name of art. ❤️‍🔥

Apostle.PI :

Type of beauty Aquinas spoke of

yUsernaame :

Hmm, I like the fifth stanza with all the 'S' sounds (both in alliteration and not, also some non 'S' alliterations)

LTN ✝️ :

yo

farman :

ion know what this mean but it prolly true

clodclodclodclod :

thanks for the poem philosophy unc this'll help me rizz up a girl named athena in my campus

☠️B🦴O🦴N🦴E🦴S☠️ :

I'm late .....but this made so much sense! as an art historian this was straight to the point no 'fluff' or sound effects.A poem IMO should be accompanied only by voice to create the movement,story, rhythm etc.nicely done man!👍🏿