im pretty bad at 3d animation but I'll just mention things I'd do if it was a still art.
- overall the background is dark issit? i feel like it doesnt really focus on the character, try adjusting the depth of field by adding blur to the background
- increase emission from the arcade screen so it casts more light onto the character's face and clothes.
- place a sharp blue or purple light behind the character to separate his silhouette from the dark background.
- add a small glint or highlight to the eyes to make them look more alive.
then again idk much on whats your vision so consider this an artist rambling haha
2026-05-29 13:05:37
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Amatz :
2026-05-30 13:38:45
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dnsh :
2026-05-29 04:11:33
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Retrowyn :
That’s awesome dude! 👏
2026-05-29 04:01:50
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ytpitch :
starting my own demon slayer animation for muichiro vs kokushibo, first time ive ever opened blender to build a scene hows this look ? any feedback and improvements is greatly appreciated
2026-05-29 16:52:59
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domino🦉 :
never give up you can do it!
2026-05-29 09:40:48
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MANKOK :
keep it up 🔥
2026-05-29 09:17:02
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Xy'sツ :
keep it up bro 👍
2026-05-29 05:08:04
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Ghibli Corner :
Teruskan
2026-05-29 09:37:00
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milty :
the eye look a little dead
it was just my opinion
keep improving your skill
2026-05-29 06:41:32
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Stickori™ :
I love your modeling but animasi dia cam tak natural.. maybe cuba recorded acting (record diri buat aksi) lepas tu guna recording tu sebagai reference untuk animasi
2026-05-29 09:32:39
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Tomatoes :
saya bukan professional tpi pendapat saya bole improve skit dekat bahagian lighting baru nmpk hidup 😁
2026-05-29 10:05:48
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rex :
jezz, this is insane🔥
2026-05-29 10:10:39
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Man :
theres many room for improvement. keep it up
2026-05-29 10:32:04
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Peacho :
Animator here. For the laugh part (i assume) try to move the body upward and down. 2:1. 2 frames for inhale 1 for hembus. Can be 2:4 as long inhales takes longer time. Lighting oredi nice👌🏻. Ouh oso keep the eyes close when laughing. Paint weight bahagian siku boleh improve. Keep it up man🔥🔥🔥
2026-06-09 05:37:17
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Uzray02 :
Cuba buat expression muka Sama dgn dia. for me it's his eyes and eyebrows. timing Mata tertutup nak gelak tuu lg lama daripada kelip biasa, kening tuu more berkerut ke bawah and mulut lagi lebar. Just my opinion if you would like to try it btw
2026-06-02 11:53:30
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Hafizy :
as a degree multimedia art and animation holder, I think you can focus on the rig and don't rush for the render part
2026-06-03 03:37:49
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ᴬᵇᵉ ᴴⁱˡᵐᵃⁿ :
keep going bro, wish u the best, it's not easy for being animator
2026-05-29 07:01:12
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fitri :
bro u can improve more thou, i see it😳
2026-06-15 00:38:58
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mask dude 404 :
Mantap.. kipidap
2026-06-05 03:54:43
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RubyXSpace 🪐 :
add principle of animation (arc)
2026-05-30 16:33:52
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Aster Biru :
💙💙💙
2026-05-29 04:08:11
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Naim-🍙 :
@malmezo1
2026-06-12 02:03:16
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