LAN1AK3A. :
honestly an interesting take, i really like how it compliments the original while being its own thing, the only thing id say is to maybe add some clouds or more indication that this far above the sky, sakupen ends first part had planets in the back so if you still want to you can always add it. and also, the crystals feel really big in a way that it js becomes egregious, you could split them up into smaller bits but thats what i would do, and this is also another thing i myself would do but ill consider varying the rotation/scale/positions of the spikes. yours looks very stagnant and spikey, which fair enough i gurdd but a more ragged feel would honestly be something id go for instead. really makes it all the more intimidating
i like how grandeur this part feels, you could emphasize it more by making the stuff move a little slower, but honestly thats just a pet peeve, i would give this an 8.7/10, you have alot of things that go well great and you executed them the best you could, the other 1.3 of my rating is the stuff that i complained about earlier in my comment. Either way, amazing part! best representation of OG sakupen ends deco ive ever seen so far.
2026-06-07 12:36:35