@ajsaxsma: Something so much more powerful than writing interiority #showdonttell #howtoshowdonttell #showdonttellwriting #writing #writingtips

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sylvix64
SylviX :
i love how creepy this turned out to be
2026-07-01 04:55:36
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chelslay_allday
Chelsea Filer :
I just want to thank you so much for your content. I’m writing my first novel and I can’t tell you how many times I have watched a video and went back to add more to a chapter that truly changed the depth of the character development.
2026-07-01 03:08:09
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mallymayo
mallymayo :
yes, love this! stopping telling me what im supposed to feel!!
2026-07-01 02:09:28
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angregoryauthor
Ang Gregory Author :
Your explanations and examples are so clear. I love them.
2026-07-01 02:30:12
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xanyad1
xanyad! :
This is very helpful, thank you!
2026-07-08 10:44:55
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cyanhartt
Paper :
this a gold mine
2026-06-30 23:50:45
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wellthatsoundslikekevin
wellthatsoundslikekevin :
I like this, it's good, but what you just described is a movie. The beauty of a book is that you get to expunge upon the other senses in a way movies cannot. With movies you see, but with books you feel.
2026-07-01 20:06:32
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ebonycsmith
Ebony Smith :
How would you flip this for first person without including the heavy thoughts?
2026-07-02 03:04:33
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torgersonflowerpower
Hailey Torgerson :
I love these tips!!
2026-07-01 00:39:17
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mal_ediction
mal :
wow, love this advice!!!
2026-07-01 00:19:13
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haleighmademereadit
HaleighMadeMeReadIt📚_Author :
Wow. This was SOOO helpful thank you so much. Your examples are so easy for me to comprehend and put into practice. I love your content. You are a godsend!
2026-07-01 02:51:54
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femininecunt
Sabrina 🎀 :
Behaviour, pattern, routine!!! Love this as always all your content ♥️♥️
2026-07-01 18:37:42
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erinapplewriter
erinapplewriter :
I get this but would love an example in first person. I feel as if it’s easier to disregard direct thoughts in third person, but it’s harder in first.
2026-07-01 21:47:57
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ajalabandele
Ajala Bandele :
Behavior. Perfectly explained. Everything else should be to color the behavior.
2026-07-01 17:27:00
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thatmbr42
MBR :
Why do I hear Mr. Brightside playing?
2026-07-01 18:23:42
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_silver.spike_
.𝐒𝐢𝐥𝐯𝐞𝐫.ೃ࿔*:・ :
Can you talk about how to write believable chemistry between two characters? (romantic or otherwise)
2026-07-01 00:38:41
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shiro_ten20
Shiro_ten20 :
In my comics I'm planning something like redemption arc for one of the characters, when he is reliving his life, there is also the part he experienced the lifes of his victims...and in this comics he had no single line. He is observing the lifes of people he hurt and is unable to say anything but also he can't stop watching that until he realise his mistakes. He stucked in the loop. In the end of this part I'm gonna give him one chance to say anything to his victims, when he will be ready for it... and actually that's the way I want to finish that part xD Without giving the answer to readers what actually he said, what were his thoughts all the time and if he actually apologized...I wonder how people will react to that😂
2026-07-01 00:18:16
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