Aj Saxsma
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lu :
i think a lot of that comes from people not having enough self-restraint in writing their characters. they’ll make them distinct on the surface level, but have them make all the same decisions they, the author, would make (or would want), instead of actually reflecting the characters.
2026-07-10 04:25:31
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Taylor Storm|Editor✍🏻📚 :
Look at what the character wants out of the scene. What motivates them?
2026-07-10 04:46:07
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Falling_Gracefully :
Ahh this should be a longer video analysis or something for maybe YouTube because it’s so much deeper than that too. For example the guy pacing the room and screaming then saying “I’m fine” isn’t necessarily a bad written event if it correlates which a bunch of behavior patterns in that character and presents as a flaw and something the character either develops from or a trait that other characters have to deal with that affect their development.
2026-07-10 03:20:44
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Riahbookie :
thank you needed this.🙃 I am bad about action but great with dialogue
2026-07-10 02:56:39
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Tinkerbell :
I appreciate this so much!
2026-07-10 04:25:53
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ILIANAxO :
Great lesson! 📝
2026-07-10 00:11:33
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Hookmeister :
Dialogue is behavior
2026-07-10 01:58:05
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Hailey Torgerson :
I love this!
2026-07-10 00:28:18
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Riahbookie :
like write a silent film before you go for the dialogue type vibe. would be a fun lesson
2026-07-10 02:57:39
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Anamei.cat :
don't die before I turn 24
2026-07-10 00:19:43
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