The phone wondering why it's getting the beatdown:
2026-07-28 18:30:04
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saphrii :
I'd been trying to show tension between a daughter and a mother and the resentment that had built up on the daughter's side. I was struggling with it. I had a scene where the daughter stomped into her room and slammed the door shut. She stood in front of it, mouth slightly ajar, breath with whistling in and out. She could still hear her mother yelling at her from downstairs so she snatched a towel off her bed and stuffed it under the space between the door and the floor. When she stood, she smiled in the silence, triumphant. Her mother's voice was finally drowned out. Not a hint of interiority. Eureka. 😁
2026-07-29 00:06:33
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Ajala Bandele :
Boooooo!!!! Now I gotta go back and delete some crap. Boooooooooo!!!!!
2026-08-02 19:50:05
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Stephanie | Fantasy Writer 🐉 :
Do you have any advice for weaving in world building in a fantasy novel without info dumping
2026-07-28 20:09:59
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W. Wilson - Writer :
I caught it half way through. I was looking for the pattern, lol. This is a really great way to explain it. I'm favoriting this one.
2026-07-29 00:55:02
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I'm just a girl 🎀🔻 :
omg this is fking genius I love you .thank you 🫶
2026-07-29 11:15:37
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S. L. Hemmings-Hall | Writer :
I love this! Super helpful
2026-07-28 19:43:09
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Nana's Notebook 📚🖊👩🦳 :
wow.
2026-07-29 00:17:01
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