Hi! Are you still offering services to look over common app essays?
2026-07-29 01:29:58
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🌚 :
“I have mastered the art of socks. Every single night, five pairs of Kirkland wool socks become part of a ritual I never expected to perfect” I wanna talk about the change of perspective of my pin straight asian hair, and the hook is about curling my hair using socks. any feedback pls?🥹🥹
2026-07-30 11:00:06
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joe :
I wrote mine about a specific phrase my dad told me that made me change my ways thriughout HS for the better, especially academically is this good?
2026-07-29 01:15:44
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Em 🪳 :
mine is so bad half of it isnt about me but i dont want to change it
2026-07-29 16:43:49
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luv.angie42 :
“Condemning myself to eternal hell is the best decision I’ve ever made.” i’m writing about how i found myself through rejecting god
2026-08-04 03:45:15
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Christin_Z :
My essay is about working at my family’s restaurant right after COVID and how that experience shaped my sense of responsibility and interest in healthcare, especially understanding how small actions can impact others. Idk if this is good idea i literally don’t know what to write other than that cuz I literally spent all my time during high school and middle school at the restaurant helping out…
2026-08-02 17:46:22
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Iryna :
Would writing about the idea of home be too cliché for an essay? I’ve moved over 11 times, lived in three countries, and had to leave my home country because of the war so it’s a big part of my journey
2026-08-04 11:52:26
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partenyo :
One of my drafts is about how gardening has impacted my life any thoughts
2026-07-30 11:14:26
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nino :
Im writing mine about how the shift from being an only child to having to babysit a much younger sibling made me search for alt ways to get involved in my community and how that impacted what i began doing — does this sound ok?
2026-07-29 13:57:32
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lili :
what if i talked about how i was raised by both my grandparents and my mother and talk about how being raised by two generations changed my moral values and perspective on life?
2026-07-29 16:26:44
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🫗 :
i’m currently writing my essay and i was wondering what bigger themes should my essay connect too. like im writing about a cultural food that’s significant but i don’t know what bigger theme i need to convey with that and stuff. i was also thinking about writing about a necklace that is sig i can’t to me b it idk what hugger theme i should connect to that one as well. please help!!
2026-07-29 04:32:15
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Isa!<3 (Taylor’s version) :
i started writing mine about the two different philosophies i try to live by and the reasons behind them, is that a good start? or should i scrap it completely
2026-07-29 18:00:25
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Gio :
I wrote about being my younger brother’s first example, like his trail and error so he doesn’t have to make the mistakes I have. In a way being the first chapter so he can finish the rest of the story
2026-07-29 16:00:56
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🐒carlett :
im writing how coming from a small town with no opportunities besides farming, i learned to persevere and create my own and succeeded through my hard work. is this good?
2026-07-29 20:18:42
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chris 🦔 :
what if i wrote about a saying from my caribbean country that i always get told? (the saying is “who doh hear does feel,” it’s basically like if you don’t listen to what someone is saying then you’ll feel bad consequences) i’d relate it to me learning to persevere and push the boundaries instead of shrinking under what other people say/ what the norm is
2026-07-29 02:03:37
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ohristine :
i don’t know if my story about being a restaurant kid is unique or worthy enough
2026-07-29 00:55:38
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Edward :
Can I write about Goku
2026-08-10 06:47:06
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loren :
mine is about the color pink and the preteen phase where I hated pink and now pink holds a lot of morals that I live by
2026-08-03 01:09:43
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TeDeRuda :
How about a specific tradition from my culture connecting it to me growing to accept the changes that came with moving to the U.S?
2026-07-29 01:07:10
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kendkgqtw35 :
can anyone read mine and give me tips on this account?🙏
2026-07-29 03:59:54
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Jack DeVivo :
I’m doing 1. A story of creating an informational college TikTok, then helping students across the country, have now helped students in 7 different countries in the past two weeks. I started this all two months ago
2026-07-30 16:32:32
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oliviaykoo :
Hi!! Mine is similar to #5- would you be willing to read over it for me?
2026-07-29 04:31:46
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🪡ory :
i'm writing mine about how i was pushed by everyone in my life to go into teaching, but fell in love with chemistry my sophomore year and everything changed. is that good?
2026-07-29 16:13:34
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itsjustdevon :
How is my idea? : I measured success through numbers & complex solutions becuase my identity was tied to being the person with the answers, until one moment forced me to realize my greatest innovation begin by understanding other people’s needs (summary sounds a little vague but the essay is very specific)
2026-07-29 06:55:46
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Amanda :
Mine was about what drove me (not about motivation) but coming back after tragedy and being able to hold my own. It got me into UAlbany and with a partial scholarship along with my enrollment deposit waived
2026-08-27 13:47:47
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