hey, i was wondering if this is your common app essay?
2026-09-30 12:57:39
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shaelyn :
i’ve never seen this format before!! so unique love this
2026-08-04 14:41:06
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youstinitortellini :
Your questions about life and death immediately made me think of philosophy. Someone with a bachelors in it, I really hope that you take some time to explore those questions through some philosophy classes. I think you’re exactly the right person to study this
2026-08-05 02:06:33
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Anna :
i was a writing coach for students applying for college for a few years..i saw more than 1000 essays and yet never anything like this! the final entry being in the future ties everything together and shows the reader who you are - creative, thoughtful, and hopeful. well done!! those qualities will take you very far 💗
2026-08-06 16:29:44
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IM HEREEEE :
u might not know u might do but this is not just creative this is one of the most amazing essays I've read. i felt im reading a whole story. it feels like wings and fluffy clouds full of laughter 💖 u make that moment for me just A BEAUTIFUL ESSAY HONESTLY
2026-10-10 12:48:44
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mary 🇨🇺 :
i like that the last date is in the future ❤️
2026-08-05 15:54:57
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shuhan li :
this is so creative and so beautiful
2026-08-04 07:27:56
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savannawesomeunicorn :
How did you write about being in college if that was your college application? No hate btw this piece is soooooo Amazing
2026-08-06 02:29:07
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Elara Solene :
This is Bradley. He was my boyfriend and he passed away unexpectedly at dinner. I understand you and your thoughts as I have them too. I miss him deeply. 🖤 Congratulations on your achievement and I wish you many more.
2026-08-05 05:15:56
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hasinii :
u got the writing and smartness genes ❤️❤️
2026-08-04 13:53:20
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viamcinnis :
this is beautiful but were you at that one coldplay concert 😭😭
2026-08-05 02:49:33
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Ramennozzles :
is this format allowed??
2026-08-05 09:36:19
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Grace 🎰🐙 :
my mom died from an aeortic rupture when i was 11, all i can say is im proud of how strong you are!! that is one of the most peaceful ways to go so if it makes you feel any better, he was in no pain and just quietly went. sending you love, it’s never easy 🫶🫶
2026-08-05 04:44:11
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r :
crying because i ask myself those same questions about death and grief all the time. this was so beautifully written, and congratulations on your acceptance!! i’m going into my senior year, you’ll have a great time :)
2026-08-05 04:52:23
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tayelayne_ :
My boss just passed last week and I’ve never resonated with emotions so well. Beautifully written.
2026-08-05 00:26:15
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Janja :
My eyes got so blurry I couldn’t finish it for few mins
2026-08-09 21:08:55
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katelyn pacheco :
Girl, never thought an essay would make me emotional. It’s just amazing!!
2026-08-09 21:18:55
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️jaz :
aw grace i’m so proud of you
2026-08-04 04:36:07
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Mys :
This is genuinely spectacular
2026-08-07 01:26:39
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leah 𖣂 . :
wow i’ve never seen an essay written like this before, you’re very creative. it’s inspiring 💗
2026-08-05 04:14:20
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ari :
October 14 is my birthday. I love this essay so much, and hope you have a blast in college
2026-08-04 23:28:52
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angieఌ :
this is the most beautiful thing i’ve ever read. i’ve experienced a lot of loss, and i’ve journaled before but this makes me wish i continued. i hope that this pain doesn’t find you often, but i hope you continue to heal from the moments where it feels hard💗 your heart is incredibly pure.
2026-08-05 02:48:17
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di__eog1 :
This is beautiful, congrats! You will do great
2026-08-04 07:05:52
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Academic Tools :
You are so creative
2026-08-11 18:04:32
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Kayleen :
This is so beautiful, you expressed all the emotions of grief that are difficult to put into words. This reminds me of my boss who tragically passed at my job. She was a burst of light and an amazing mother. Rest in peace Emma 💜
2026-09-19 17:40:08
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