@magicmythsinkstai: I'm looking for some feedback on how Act 1 is working as I do this rewrite. It is a romantasy, book 1 in a planned trilogy that I am currently thinking of self-publishing in the future. Think 3 Musketeers meets Serpent & Dove. DM me for me details if you're interested. #BookTok #writers #betareader #romantasy #fyp
This sounds really interesting! A 3 Musketeers meets Serpent & Dove comparison definitely has me curious. I’d love to know what kind of feedback you’re hoping to get on Act 1, pacing, characters, world-building, or overall reader engagement?
2026-08-25 13:39:37
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Sakyratreader :
3 Musketeers meets Serpent & Dove? That’s a fun combination. Since you’re rewriting Act 1, what are you most wanting fresh eyes to catch, pacing, character dynamics, or whether the opening hooks the reader?
2026-08-24 19:20:10
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handyread :
Do you still need a fresh set of eyes on your WIP?
2026-08-25 12:24:00
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Bettereader01 :
I'm interested
2026-08-24 13:55:18
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Magic, Myths and Ink Stains 📚 :
Thank you for the interest! To answer so.e common questions, the word count of this section is approx 22k words and 10 chapters including a prologue, and it is a romantasy
2026-08-06 14:41:23
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SMÃRT 🤓 MÊ💪 :
Hi! Yes, absolutely. I'm a beta reader and I'd be happy to help. If you're currently looking for readers, I'd love to take a look at your manuscript. Is there any specific type of feedback you'd like me to focus on (plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, grammar, or overall reader experience)?
2026-08-05 19:25:42
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julletalice :
Hi Magic are you still looking for readers I'd love to give a constructive feedback
2026-08-22 03:19:50
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Books spikes☺️ :
Hey still need beta readers?
2026-08-09 13:49:07
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Charlotte Hayes :
This sounds like a fascinating project. Are you looking for detailed feedback on the overall reader experience or specific elements?
2026-08-05 20:04:11
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Abidemi :
I’m interested
2026-08-11 14:35:27
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Blessed Readventor :
Are you still in need of beta reader?
2026-08-21 17:40:52
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Alex Reader :
Definitely interested. Count me in 😊
2026-08-09 11:23:27
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Lisa Thomas :
I’m interested you can test me out
2026-08-10 16:58:24
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johnjennifer :
Hello magic nice work
what genre do you write??
2026-08-20 22:36:18
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Majek Tife :
Are you still open to receiving feedback?
2026-08-05 21:49:55
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firstdraftfix :
I did be happy to read Act 1 and give you honest, constructive feedback on the story, characters, pacing, and anything that could be strengthened.
2026-08-06 01:43:39
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Doris Edits & Translate 📚 :
I'm interested 🥰
2026-08-10 16:26:24
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Boluwatife :
I am interested.
2026-08-10 12:30:52
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Scribblepen :
I'm interested
2026-08-05 23:37:22
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Alice Ax :
Am interested
2026-08-12 15:55:44
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Betaloom Reader :
This sounds like a story I’d genuinely enjoy reading. If you’re looking for a beta reader, I’d be happy to connect. 😊
2026-08-17 12:47:43
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Mary Passion :
I'd be happy to help. What stage is your manuscript in right now, or is it already complete?
2026-08-14 12:40:36
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Crystal lane :
I'd love to be one of your beta reader.
what aspect do you need feedback on?
2026-08-12 19:11:01
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Emerald Reads :
If you’re open to outside feedback, I’d be happy to beta read the first chapter and share my thoughts. Would you like me to take a look?
2026-08-19 09:08:08
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