@unfpiaa_: honestly i did not expect to get 19/20 because it was my first time writing a story and i rasa macam essay i tak ikut kehendak soalan. sebelum ni buat review ja sebab our teacher tak encourage untuk buat story sebab susah, and yes, still banyak grammatical errors 😃 #spm2026 #batch09 #fyp

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phiphi_potato
Fifi_potato :
Kalau aku jadi penanda, mmg aku letak tepi kertas ni pastu baring pandang ceiling
2026-08-08 10:22:39
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unfpiaa_
uumai :
just to clarify, my dad wasn’t a single dad. he had serious kidney problems and suffered a stroke, which made him almost fully bedridden. i was honestly a really rebellious kid back then. i barely listened to my dad and mom, and i didn’t realise how precious the time i had with my dad was. i spent most of my time with him while my mom worked to support our family and pay for his medication. he was later admitted to the hospital before he passed away. so yes, the story was based on real events. some details were changed, but the feelings behind it were real. to anyone who has gone through or is going through something similar, im truly sorry and my deepest condolences. please stay strong and keep going. cherish your parents and loved ones while you still can. 🤍 mohon sedekahkan al fatihah untuk abah saya , Mohamad Fauzi Bin Man 🙏🏻
2026-08-09 07:05:55
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txtllit
bittenbynova ⁵⁵³ :
i know this is very sad but i genuinely almost had a stroke reading that😭
2026-08-08 10:41:23
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annanas_z0
na :
WHY CANT THIS TYPE OF ESSAYS COME OUT FOR MY EXAM BRUHHH I WOULDVE COOK SO BAD
2026-08-08 09:01:24
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nyenyenyenyootnyoot
🦭 :
I once made an essay like this, the difference is it's my grandma.....even crying on the paper tbh
2026-08-18 12:47:23
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izdrzk
ijad :
I would ask my student come to me and tell me the exact events
2026-08-09 07:07:22
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lyra_valee
lyra 🍎 :
and there i was writing my sad romance 😭
2026-08-08 14:25:39
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ellosveee
evi :
rindu nak belajar english highschool, i love writing essays
2026-08-09 06:25:52
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fa._.zee
minty_ssamu :
I love writing story essays. I hate that my teacher previously never encouraged any of their students to write story essays. I practiced for six months before SPM and scored well in English. One time I submitted my story essay for the first time to my English teacher, and she wondered where all the imagination came from. I was the only one she allowed to write story essays in my class
2026-08-09 01:12:20
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juniorcertified_bby
soya cincau :
Babe, the story in your essay is actually so similar to my real life 😭 My ayah was on routine dialysis too, and since I had school in the afternoon, memang I yang mostly jaga dia. Sometimes I memang penat gila and burnt out, but I was okay with it as long as ayah was healthy. then one random wed, something happened, macam heart attack or something, idk how to explain it. I balik je sekolah, baru tahu ayah dah masuk ICU. After all his children got the chance to see him, he passed away that same day,so when I read your story, it really hit different because it felt like reading something that was actually a part of my life. 😭
2026-08-09 00:45:03
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zul.hri
Zulhri :
As an English teacher, I literally got goosebumps reading your writing! 😭👏 Do you have any tips on how you manage to write this well? I’d really love to learn from you so I can share your tips with my students too. If I were your teacher, I’d definitely give you full marks! 😂 I really hope you’ll get an A+ for 1119. Keep it up, and hopefully you’ll get to pursue your studies in the UK one day. You’ve got this! 🇬🇧✨
2026-08-09 04:17:32
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symr_addn
sy4m💥 :
Essay english stories is the best... You pour your soul and let the pen dance as your thoughts become the rhythms... Each word was never meant for the mark. It was from something that have been sealed for years finally dancing on a piece of a paper.
2026-08-10 05:25:06
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syydda_
syii :
we'll never know if the story is real or what, but one thing for sure, this is someone's life anywhere out there
2026-08-08 10:27:17
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nadiahnabihahh
🫧ibi :
if this is real, innalillah
2026-08-08 09:33:57
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jul_scretch
P_jul :
kehendak soalan dia bagus gile..lah sampai kat aku dulu dia suh cerita kenangan festival sekolah..dalah aku hampir tak pernah datang festival sekolah🗿
2026-08-09 06:25:16
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tiweyelight
Hi📍 ✨ :
Wdym i cried reading this😭😭 you deserved the markk😭🙏🏻
2026-08-08 15:18:55
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chaeerisaa
arisa 𐙚 :
actually, it is a beautiful yet sorrowful story. i love the storyline. ty for writing this. i wouldve cry if im your teacher. 🫶🏻
2026-08-08 10:36:55
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hairii1147
hairi :
baru baca paragraph 40 missed call dh sedih 😭
2026-08-10 07:31:49
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yvwanzz
iwannn.™️ :
and that everybody , is my why english is my fav subject in highschool.
2026-08-08 15:10:22
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