@queenacrossthewaters: "my self insert is the prettiest, richest, smartest, has the most trauma and best boyfriend ever!!" #lizzieyoung #chloewalsh #boysoftommen #selfinsert #BookTok
oh okay but when it’s johnny for exemple who’s so hot and has all girls over him it’s realistic? like everyone in the series is described as beautiful wtf
2026-08-12 02:38:04
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lily :
Sorry, didn’t she describe EVERYONE as unrealistically beautiful/handsome 💀 Shannon was malnourished and somehow was ‘the most beautiful girl’ and the reason she got bullied was ‘because boyfriends looked at her’ PLEASE. She also somehow ended up having the ‘perfect body’ and the fourth best grades? Gibsie, the one character that was meant to be on the chubbier side ended up ‘not having any rolls’. Hardly anyone claims Hugh as most athletic but him being insanely mart isn’t unrealistic saying he had one of the most secure upbringings? Also we’re forgetting all characters are BASED off someone else. Johnny is literally her husband book reincarnate ffs
2026-08-11 11:33:01
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. :
Like I love Liz and Hugh but it’s obvious that they’re only that smart and talented cause of Chloe’s favoritism
2026-08-11 08:15:40
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lana⁉️ :
The comments don’t get it omg😭💔 Many authors have favourites but I’ve never read a story where it was that obvious. In the first books, Katie was described as gorgeous and unreal, now Lizzie is..? That doesn’t even make any sense. And in R10, all characters were mischaracterised in my opinion. Also how can Lizzie be the smartest and everything while she is living through that trauma?
2026-08-11 17:41:46
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rodainaa 🕸️ :
r10 was so bad too
2026-08-11 17:26:25
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Ophelia :
R10 was pure character assassination not only of Lizzie and the other characters, but also of their actual traits and personalities. Like, why did they suddenly look and act completely different? You can’t justify everything you wrote by just saying, “It’s a different perspective!” 😭
2026-08-11 17:12:04
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étain 🪽 :
I love Lizzie but this funny asf 😭😭
2026-08-11 05:59:01
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Ⓜ️ :
Ngl but I can’t understand how Hugh and Liz are the smartest of the series. Didn’t Katie got into Tommen with a scholarship? And Johnny also said that he needs to maintain his good grades bc of the academy. Like don’t get me wrong, I can understand that Hugh is the smartest but with everything going on with Liz it’s hard to understand how she is SO smart tho. And how is Hugh the MOST athletic when rugby is just an activity for him???
2026-08-11 19:15:01
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Avah :
Like why did she suddenly become the richest and smartest
2026-08-11 11:32:30
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(:Matilda:) :
Okay I love Hugh but he is not the most athletic boy in the books it’s obviously Johnny Kavanagh
2026-08-11 22:10:25
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𝐬𝐨𝐟𝐢 :
this is not my team
2026-08-12 02:59:12
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️ :
i wish some authors would keep this information to themselves. curiously, they always see themselves in the characters who are the most attractive, receive the most male attention, and somehow have issues with other female characters (most times bc of boys ) the same thing happened with penelope douglas and her character rika fane, it made rika unbearable to read ever since i found out lol
2026-08-11 15:57:03
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n :
Katie enthusiast 😭✌🏿✌🏿 it makes sense
2026-08-11 21:37:25
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mia 🌀🏌🏼♀️ :
It’s because Chloe favors her over every character
2026-08-11 17:46:22
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jewel 🦄 🦄 :
i havent read r10 is it that corny
2026-08-11 00:13:26
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Mybooks :
IM FUCKING SOBBING
2026-08-12 00:51:58
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LucyBrave :
Me hace gracia cuando quieren defender a Lizzie diciendo "Ay es que Lizzie es la autora, por eso Liz está más desarrollada que el resto" y no se dan cienta que eso deja en muy mal lugar a CW como escritora y persona 🤣🤣
2026-08-11 18:21:12
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Ⓜ️ :
And I’m not even gonna lie but CW nerfed Liz’s character SO BAD with all the traumas she gave her. It would’ve been much better if she just kept M*ark, Caohime’s death and her $H, but the mental illness, the miscarriage, the electroshock and the scary lady, I fear, weren’t necessary💔
2026-08-11 19:11:16
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audrccyy :
some of these comments are rage bait
2026-08-11 17:51:28
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shanclairepilled :
is her boyfriend meant to say she’s ugly, also hugh isn’t more athletic than johnny
2026-08-11 13:18:41
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Div :
this right here is why I resent hizzie ,the level of self insert gets so effing plain that it is inexcusable. takes away from any relatabiility something i dored either the lynchs . Joey or Shannon were not unaffected from the trauma in their lives ie their grades being average inspite being academically inclined .
2026-08-11 17:36:36
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s ໒꒱ :
also chloe walsh inserted herself into shannon, joey, gibsie and lizzie as they’re the four main characters of the series because they represent her story. but interesting how u don’t mention them…
2026-08-11 16:52:14
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Simran :
Id 100% do the same thing if I wrote a book…😭
2026-08-11 19:09:21
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