@loanwdlg: a poem from my book “The Man Who Could’ve Been” #poem #poetry #poems #poemsforyou #fyp

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bre39y
Bre39y :
Not true, if I be half the ma my father is I’ll be lucky, he did everything for us, he made it out by himself and he took care of all 22 siblings he got, and made sure that we wouldn’t ever need anyone but him
2026-08-19 13:26:22
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evbubu
Gru :
My greatest tragedy is that I will not be 1/1000th the man my father is. He’s the greatest man I’ve ever known
2026-08-18 23:20:28
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hamzaalii._
Za :
I wish to be half the man he is
2026-08-17 01:34:49
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kaneslord
Lord Kanes :
It's what I wasted half my talent on, frankly. You're welcome, Old Man. The curse you carried dies with you, my brothers and I refuse.
2026-08-17 16:44:19
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legendarian_14
legendarian_14 :
I feel like this can be interpreted both in a good way (how all parents want their children to be better than they are) or a more negative way (he hurt me so I’ll resist ever becoming like him). And I find that duality and mass relativity to be oddly comforting
2026-08-18 06:23:41
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lvlerc00
lvlerc :
Wrong my father planted the seed . I became everything he couldnt . Love you Dad . RIP Moony
2026-08-17 08:23:50
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lifeisbliss69
Ryan Gill :
My dad is amazing hope to be half the man he is.
2026-08-18 23:01:14
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henry.t182
Henry :
It’s to be better , i want my son to not be like me. I want him to be better
2026-08-18 23:48:48
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jakster312
Jake :
wouldn't wanna be like anyone but him! my idol for life!
2026-08-17 00:25:46
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infinityand420
What In the Jishy :
I would beg to differ in my stead, I’m meant to carry my father’s legacy but be better. I must be better, we must be better fellas.
2026-08-18 16:03:34
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slamccent
D 💜 :
@D 💜: I told my dad today that I joined the navy. He told me he always wanted to be in the service. (He’s an anesthesiologist) I’m now confused
2026-08-18 04:25:27
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ragebxit
( -_•)ᡕᠵデᡁ᠊╾━💥 :
😪
2026-08-18 20:34:12
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thiccsf
thiccsf :
he’ll never get to know The man I became. or how I’ll raise my kids. Gotta break the cycle
2026-08-18 16:24:12
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cjkar
Cj :
2026-08-16 23:25:48
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tenetnetnet
hee.hee :
be better
2026-08-17 00:44:30
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wesleybutler__
Wesley Butler :
For me to understand that I have a dad in this world and he knows who I am. The fact that he wants nothing to do with me has never met me has never reached out first.
2026-08-18 13:32:13
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henrycans0
￴ ￴ ￴ ￴ ￴ ￴￴ ￴ :
i love my father but ill never be like him.
2026-08-17 00:36:21
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pitbull09cb
Chris :
i do it out of hate but close enough
2026-08-18 07:47:45
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mangydog23
Mangy Dog 23 🐕 :
I hope he finds solace one day, I’ve always felt like I failed him and rectifying that is out of the question 😔
2026-08-18 03:09:34
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nino.castorio
nino :
Became the man I am today to protect my siblings and mom from him never forget the day I watched him become scared of me after being scared of him for years. Core memory of where rage began for me. Tears running down my face with a smile saying “please hit me again it will be the last thing you ever do.” He took a step back and I took a step forward. Never tried me again after that day
2026-08-18 13:37:12
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