her writing is so weird and clearly not-thought through because she combines the worst of two writing instincts:
- she writes in vague statements, opting out of specificity to keep you, the listener, at an arms length
- she writes in on the noise and cliche metaphors, opting out of creating weird images that would compensate for the vagueness.
Worst of all, she tells you how she feels. Show don't tell is the number one rule in writing. You will never see a scene in a song from hers that wasn't co-written by audrey hobert. It is just baffling how people consider her to be on the level of Taylor Swift or Olivia Rodrigo. She is one of the least talented writers of her size.
2026-08-29 15:43:24
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