Layae
Region: NL
Monday 07 September 2026 16:01:53 GMT
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fictional robot lover :
The art looks great!! but I feel like the poses are a bit too stiff on some pages?? kinda feels like no movement is happening sometimes, there should be more panel variety and not just squares and rectangles, different shapes and overlapping panels add a lot of emotion and flow to the scene, for example, the page in which the blonde girl circles through different emotions, the whole interaction seems really stiff and feels more like a character emotion study slideshow, consider using less panels to convey the same emotions and tell the exact same story, sometimes less is better and lets the eye focus on important elements and story bits without feeling overwhelmed by the amount of panels :))
2026-09-07 16:23:04
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monyan💤 :
yes!!!!!
2026-09-07 17:56:12
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