whatever is wrong with her is the same thing that happened to that Bradley guy when his ex broke up with him for being broke…
2026-09-08 13:09:39
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Dontchaknow5 :
You did a good job of compassionately explaining why your friend acted the way she did and not excusing her behavior.
2026-09-08 06:49:02
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meh :
What’s even worse, is that she has no idea she’s creating another version of her story by allowing herself to become the terrible thing that happens to the kids in that family..
2026-09-08 02:36:23
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Enrique :
she had to boss up and bought the company they worked for, and fired them. thus forcing them into selling, just like breaking bad showed us
2026-09-08 01:07:04
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DJ Conceited :
I needed you as a creative writing teacher.
2026-09-07 23:38:20
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Dha Kvrmaa Fairy 🧚🏽💫 :
Damn i wanted to buy my childhood house bac too 😭😭😭😭
2026-09-08 01:30:14
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Saint Aisha 😇 :
This is perfect. Inspired me to get up and continue writing my script lol (thank you). Those characters are the most interesting, they do these awful things, which a reasonable person wouldn’t do, but they have their reasons why they’re doing it, and we as readers sympathize with them, even if we wholeheartedly disagree with their actions. THAT is good storytelling right there. ♥️
2026-09-08 23:44:08
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sermocinatrix :
I am a strong believer in letting your fictional characters f up. like, they have everything they need in order to succeed but they fail all the same because that's what a character flaw is
2026-09-07 23:10:04
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CubaLibre :
Crazy to put sentimental value in something material
2026-09-08 13:50:08
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MrTikTokThot :
Wow. Compelling.
2026-09-09 04:04:46
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Moriah? :
You get it!!!
2026-09-09 02:21:00
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Heather :
I found this story riveting. Now I want to read everything you write.
2026-09-07 22:35:30
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van :
Great gatsby core
2026-09-09 09:24:27
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Enigmanic :
This is why the ending of Parasite is so good
2026-09-08 14:16:04
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Another_Mike :
She was experiencing fascination
2026-09-08 00:54:20
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DanceJustinDance :
She is her father’s son.
2026-09-08 01:06:27
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bluestockingt :
This is the best part of D&D (or any other collaborative storytelling game) - when the answers your player’s characters come up with are *wild*, because of all of the events they come to the table with and all of the moments you wrote together before this moment. 💙
2026-09-08 00:27:15
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ATP :
Wow that’s crazy
2026-09-08 01:23:40
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badgersprite :
It’s a really good point a lot of people miss that something can be simultaneously understandable yet not defensible. I think a lot of conversations get shut down when people mistake an expression of empathy or understanding for why a character or person did something as an argument in support of their actions
2026-09-10 01:42:33
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Karyn B. :
I’m so glad that this wasn’t a real story and I want to hear more
2026-09-08 16:44:05
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maude411 :
Where’s the book then
2026-09-08 09:56:31
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Cyrus Norr :
the web serial worm distilled characters personalities in this way. I dream of writing like that
2026-09-08 17:28:39
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Benny911 :
She living in a disney movie fr the real world dont work like that 😭
2026-09-08 16:20:42
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