"She reminded me I witnessed some pretty gruesome stuff. I said I know, I'm witnessing it right now, I'm witnessing it always" absolutely floored me. you captured exactly how that feels. beautiful poems
2026-09-23 04:47:44
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sky :
the way you make your writing flow without including much rhyme is so interesting to me, like some words just GO together despite not rhyming at all (i.e accident/stuff insurance/always). Im not a poet but I am interested so could you tell me if theres a specific named technique for this so I can look into it?
2026-09-19 18:55:29
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Delphinium_macabre_ :
You are so good with your words. It flows through you so well. Singing on paper. Or screen.
2026-10-26 21:43:39
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chicklebits :
the tone and energy of the first one is so raw and gritty, it's angry and numb and a little humorous. i'm really impressed with it, this is good stuff dude
2026-09-24 18:01:43
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kat of the week :
got his dead ass
2026-09-24 16:38:51
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LifeFan2004 :
I adore this. Stunningly good. Always such a delight to see poetry on here... I like to write on my account too and it feels like throwing leaves out of a window and hoping one lands in someone's hands. lol
2026-09-17 17:13:38
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kenny dreadful :
dude this is so fucking good this format is something special
2026-10-26 15:30:40
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gamz :
i dont get ot but maybe its just thst i take it at face value
2026-10-11 20:10:25
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𑣲ava :
this song with your writing flows perfectly
2026-09-24 17:27:21
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ria :
‘because i wasnt so sure the man had any’
2026-09-29 12:17:48
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𝒂𝒏𝒏𝒂 :
Pass me a scone
2026-10-22 22:46:34
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ari (fu’s #1 cheerleader) :
this is why i judge people who say they hate poetry. you dont hate poetry, you hate bad poetry. or you hate boring poetry maybe! this isnt bad or boring. this is good poetry.
2026-10-10 19:33:08
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𓅪 :
Deliciously witty and real
2026-09-30 14:09:14
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ori :
I love how "morbid" this feels, the words you use flow together so well I'm so so so impressed by your work!! :)
2026-09-27 16:45:17
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Adah :
“ She thinks I’m funny which I don’t think is allowed. But I love to partake in what’s not allowed “
2026-10-03 20:27:23
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caro 🐞 :
can someone explain the meaning i’m not sure im grasping it
2026-10-19 21:01:18
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nutella :
I’m not crazy about poetry really, never have been, but I read this yesterday and I haven’t been able to stop thinking about it since. I don’t know what you’re doing and how you’re doing it but dude like don’t stop
2026-10-05 08:12:33
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hoda :
genuinely one of the best poems I’ve read in a loooonggggg time, if u do become a writer I’ll deffo be buying every book!
2026-09-19 19:00:00
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m :
this is absolutely incredible work. if you ever stop writing the world will be duller. xx
2026-09-23 23:35:21
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s :
when ppl ask me who my favourite writer is, i think of u
2026-09-17 16:16:14
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Mayo :
Love the prose, psychological literature at its finest — I just finished the stranger by camus, i’m so happy about the existential flow lol
2026-09-29 02:16:54
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thoughtforfood :
this is so beautiful, the simplicity in some parts ties the whole thing together. The last line of the 3rd poem being "brains" and nothing else is perfect, please keep writing i love to see talented expressive and well spoken people in this world
2026-10-01 22:28:17
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bailey :
You make me laugh and then you make me cry
2026-09-24 07:23:10
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Ansleigh🙈 :
You are Hilarious and your thought process is perfect 😆I’m super happy your writing came upon my fyp
2026-09-23 19:10:16
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💌 :
the repeated sopranos mentions really remind me of the book one’s company, these are really cool poems
2026-10-05 18:10:44
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