Mark Hernandez | Writing Coach
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Thursday 15 October 2026 21:40:39 GMT
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😮💨 :
Opinion on this: “Darth Vader’s transformation is awesome” then talk about how I was lost in what I wanted to do, until doing research into Darth Vaders surgery and it got me interested in biology
2026-10-16 20:45:52
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user123456789642256864326 :
could i write about how growing up watching true crime with my mom inspired me to want to become a lawyer?
2026-10-16 20:27:22
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sashakeli :
can you plz show how to write.attrective study plan and essays for abroad schlorship
2026-10-16 07:21:11
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bea 🖤 :
opinions on “Should customers tip at a restaurant? I am a part of the 22.5 percent of high school students to have a job, and of that percent, 33 percent that work in the restaurant industry. What I believe, absolutely.”
2026-10-16 20:22:50
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Brooke :
should I write about my month long study abroad at 16? It was the best time of my life and I was so happy, but genuinely everything went wrong it coulda been a movie
2026-10-16 07:30:19
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Alivia :
“Can I get a chicken quesadilla and a medium Baja blast zero?” It’s about how I used to struggle with change (I wouldn’t change my Taco Bell order) and now I thrive in it and in my conclusion I am getting a new order
2026-10-16 05:37:09
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backatthebarnyard42 :
“I believe I’m single-handedly responsible for the greatest thing to ever happen to (my city).” And I talk about how I ate at a burger place when I was eleven on spring break and become obsessed with it and began DMing the restaurant multiple times to come to my city that when they finally announced they were, I credited it to my constant DMs and I connect it to how I have always had a persistent/determined attitude.
2026-10-16 03:12:37
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Coyote Peterson :
Does this work “My friend hisses when I don’t feed him fast enough”.
2026-10-16 04:06:09
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BeckyTYB :
Would it be good to write my essay on how all 5 of my siblings are special needs and how I grew to love medicine through having to be a parent to siblings who are older than me and how I at first resented it but then grew to love taking care of them
2026-10-16 06:04:53
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Gissell💗 :
Does this intro sound okay “I knew life was important, but I don’t think I truly understood what that meant.” Then I just tell my story about being SA and almost died, fighting for my life and how it genuinely made me realize I didn’t want my life to end so soon even what I went through in the past. Now I value life because I truly understand how valuable it is, and how it’s amazing to keep waking up every day and now I want to live a life being a voice for others who can’t speak.
2026-10-16 16:39:13
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alison 🖤 :
Okay, is this too much? When I was younger I grew up with wall decal stickers of the wizard of oz, when I turned 5 my parents got me new ones with frozen characters. I cried that whole birthday bc I didn’t want to have frozen stickers on my wall. The movie had just came out and every girl I knew liked frozen. Using this story, it represented my desire to stand out bc I grew up in an art (dance) that if you fit in you weren’t noticed. I’m not sure what my overall theme should be but I can have it resolve but it’s my most abstract idea…
2026-10-16 18:41:31
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v :
would it be okay to write about how growing up acting as a parent for my younger sisters while my parents both worked 2 jobs shaped my passion for helping children?
2026-10-16 14:42:03
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〽️ya :
what if i wrote about a lana del rey song?
2026-10-16 02:18:44
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𝐼𝑠𝑖𝑑𝑜𝑟𝑎 :
is it okay if i talk how i am volunteering in a place that changed my perspective of seeing things? i dont have more ideas😭
2026-10-16 00:29:03
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🌸 zainab 🌸 :
is this a good idea: i talk about how bubble tea saved my life because it gave me autonomy over my contamination ocd by serving as evidence of my own mind continuing to fight against my ocd. shows that i can persevere even when seems hopeless. shows i have what it takes to go into a very demanding field.
2026-10-16 04:41:28
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olga :
how is “i don’t like taking pictures with my phone camera” i then talk about my digital camera that was a part of my childhood capturing my current memories and how one pic on my camera gives me more satisfaction then 50 from my phone camera
2026-10-16 06:11:11
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owen :
Would this work as an opening- I lift my tenth six foot long one hundred and fifty pound railroad tie out of my friend’s backyard as sweat trickles down my back in one hundred degree heat. When my friend’s dad passed away unexpectedly, left behind was a back yard overgrown with weeds, had patchy grass, and a strong need for renovations. I then go on to talk about how me and my friend renovated the backyard changed my idea of service and how it has inspired me to help in my community.
2026-10-15 22:44:54
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🥟<3 :
kinda workshopping my essay rn but my topic is on how I usually only went to concerts and sat in the nosebleeds but ever since my brother introduced me to the local hardcore scene as well as continuously going to local shows made me more outgoing/confident. Is this topic good?
2026-10-16 01:41:33
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️mariah :
hey is this okay for my intro “I was never afraid of the dark or ghosts as a kid, instead i feared the heavy footsteps down the hallway that were easy to recognize. Growing up, I was practically forced to become an intuitive observer of human behavior which prompted me to identify micro-expressions and mood shifts easily; Although doing so, i had this lingering question in the back of my head, “Why do people act the way they do?”. And then i talking about why i want to study neuroscience
2026-10-16 12:17:38
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twoninesixspeciale :
I think we're overdo for essay advice
2026-10-16 00:06:03
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zarsh :
It feels as if the hunt for such a non cliche essay topic leads to a lot less creativity, at least for me. This is an intriguing perspective.
2026-10-16 06:18:12
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zk 💥 :
Help i don’t have a topic
2026-10-15 21:47:44
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lily184051 :
Is this okay for my first two sentences and ending?: I once laminated a chore chart for my family. I was twelve; nobody had asked, but it made sense to me. The end is: That’s what the question mark represents. I still make the plan. I just don’t laminate it anymore. The essay is about how dealing with my mom’s breast cancer diagnosis taught me how to handle unpredictability and be more flexible. The question mark I’m referencing was on a research poster I did.
2026-10-15 22:58:39
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alya8 :
hello please is this a good first sentence: Every birthday since i was eight, I have tested whether my mind had learned to imagine nothing.
2026-10-15 21:50:25
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Isabel :
Hi! I commented on a previous video about some topics and I decided on one. One of the topics I commented was about my mom and I’ve decided to write about her because she died about a month and a half ago now and it wouldn’t make sense to me to not write about her because her life and death both played a huge role in my life and what i want to do with my future. I was thinking about talking about how I take pride in being the person my friends go to for advice and how I got the traits that make me give good advice because my mom is a special needs teacher and it requires her to be passionate and observant and how I realized that she is the one who gave me those traits. And other application of those traits with my lifeguarding job. And then I wanted to talk about her journey with cancer and how I want to be a doctor because of the patient/ patients family connection because I was once the family member sitting in the chair and I can empathize with other people in that situation. Also go into the specifics about how what being responsible changed to me because I’ve always done honors, ap classes, sports, and clubs but once she got diagnosed I stopped organizing my days based around where I need to be and more where others needed me. And talk about how after remission she got rediagnosed because it had metastasized into her brain but even a week after her brain surgery she made sure to come to my senior pictures with a walker just to be there for me after I had been trying to be there for her. And how I aspire to be that kind of person to others. And then like tie in how also make me a good student and help me go through medical school. It’s kind of disorganized but what do you think?
2026-10-16 01:46:05
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