𝗞𝗼𝗮𝗟𝗮𝗻𝗮
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Thursday 22 October 2026 16:37:45 GMT
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Sam :
The nice pumpkin space latte poured onto my yummy lungs as gold filaments fulfilling every intricate vein of my longing and sorrow soul
2026-10-22 18:19:09
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jo :
Yuri vs natsuki
2026-10-22 20:15:04
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mae :
It has absolutely no flow or rhythm, the illusion of descriptive words and aestheticism is making you think it’s good
2026-10-23 05:45:16
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𖤐aether𖤐 :
anyone that actually knows anything about writing knows that just cuz the one on the left has larger words and a wider vocabulary doesnt mean its better
2026-10-22 21:33:47
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brisa ⋆.ೃ࿔* :
unironically the poem on the right is better
2026-10-23 02:09:32
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ks :
Better than anything Taylor swift ever wrote
2026-10-22 19:15:08
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cindyNo5 :
I like both, just different styles
2026-10-23 16:15:44
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Fairytopia :
She truly is a poet cuz I wouldn’t be able to write on that level if I was 12, let alone now
2026-10-22 17:38:15
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アア :
"no rhymes and just big words" that's how a poem written lol... matter of fact poem has no rules.. it's either bad or good, but never wrong
2026-10-23 09:24:09
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jordan :
i actually love caroline’s a lot more, it’s so crazy that an 11 year old can use such succinct words to describe such complex feelings ♥️beautiful
2026-10-22 22:38:05
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jaxsen :
ended shakespear
2026-10-22 16:50:21
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eatscroissants :
Her sister’s poem is fabulous
2026-10-22 22:36:57
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s 🦦 :
both poems are equally as good for kids their age idk !!! the first one has powerful and evocative imagery but the second one also clearly has good rhythm, and is concise and punchy
2026-10-23 02:39:40
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giovannijackson64 :
Purple prose for Lana and also age appropriate language for Both
2026-10-22 18:32:48
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alexander🪽 :
it sounds like those overly descriptive paragraphs they force u to write in elementary school to describe all 5 senses im sorry but its not good at all
2026-10-22 22:29:34
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きよあき :
Great poems, totally different style / era
2026-10-22 18:11:26
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deimosheart :
Even as a baby she was obsessed with themes of decay and times changing 😭
2026-10-22 17:43:58
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fabian :
Now lets see their brother‘s poem😍
2026-10-22 17:09:54
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. :
They’re both nice
2026-10-22 19:08:48
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mike michael :
she’s really just got that shit fr
2026-10-22 18:04:13
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esx :
is it just me but I don’t understand the poem in the right at all??
2026-10-23 00:18:28
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shwexc :
the right is insanely good
2026-10-22 20:13:10
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lay_stevie01💋 :
”the lake ripples with the colors of grey and silver”
2026-10-22 19:02:48
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M :
I actually really like her sisters poem! Maybe not the last line. Is that a thing? Sounds not safe
2026-10-22 19:33:23
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unrealbrissa :
She just knew who she was from a young age
2026-10-22 18:59:43
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