@wolframcollege: 3.9 GPA and 32 ACT with a strong story 🌟 Writing about losing a loved one is better if it is not about a grandparent, external relative, or dog. Immediate family is impactful enough to be central to your story, and this student did a great job making the essay about the color “green” not just what happened. Check out MaxAdmit.com for feedback on your college essay!