Mark Hernandez | Writing Coach
Region: US
Monday 26 October 2026 21:42:48 GMT
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𓊆ྀིvika𓊇ྀི :
Can we just get rid of college essays? You don’t need to know my life story just accept me based off my grades and extracurriculars. Like stay out of my business tf 😭😭
2026-10-27 01:37:51
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Morgan III :
What about "I spent an hour and a half solving a problem I already knew the awnser to"—Its about this data analysis that we were instructed to use chat GPT to get the awnser for (because it was a psych class, not stats) and I had no other work to do so I refused to use AI even though my partner already had and got our answer, but I spent an hour and a half watching youtube videos and teaching myself how solve this impossible outcome, and did it.
2026-10-31 04:42:46
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zack :
we need to get rid of college essays cus its just dudes competing to see who can make the next "i hate the letter s" when they have the writing skills of a cinderblock and use ai
2026-10-26 22:44:06
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kitsunami.i :
mine is "everyone knows that Mario is cool as fuck"
2026-10-27 01:12:05
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Mina :
My hook is “I really wanna go to this college, so let me in ho.”
2026-10-26 23:58:23
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nabiha <3 :
my essay was a crime scene report but the missing person was my future self, and they found me at the college 😛😛😛
2026-10-27 02:18:41
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unicornprincesssparkly :
It’s gonna be the deaths of their past selves going through the stages of education and life I can feel it
2026-10-26 23:28:21
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ᡕᠵデᡁࠣ亠💥ᵀᵒᵇʸ ྀིྀིྀ :
“pretty please with a cherry and sprinkles on top”
2026-10-27 00:58:36
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itshayesspam :
“the boy from district 5, mayfair, who’s the third?” “my old self. i killed my old self to be with you” 🐍
2026-10-27 00:05:33
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Mark Hernandez | Writing Coach :
“Oh, no, Mark! You don’t get it! It’s a metaphor.” No, I get it.
2026-10-26 21:46:50
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truck-kun :
but what if you actually killed three people, like three separate human beings
2026-10-31 03:13:04
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𝓛𝓲𝓰𝓱𝓽𝜗🪷 :
What about the line "In my house, we put dirty clothes in the microwave and dirty dishes in the laundry basket"
2026-10-26 23:35:05
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🪝orey ⸆⸉ :
‘My name is Tanka Jahari. I would never order a whole pizza for myself. But I will take it anyway.’ got me into Harvard Law
2026-10-28 01:19:20
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CeruleanGolem :
"get ready with me to give me that acceptance letter"
2026-10-27 14:30:14
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🌀elio ⎕ :
What if I did “okay so boom”
2026-10-27 03:10:52
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b :
American college essays are so strange because what do you mean you need a hook? in the UK we just speak about what we're good at and want to learn about lol
2026-10-30 08:56:08
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🦧 u stink if ur mad 😈 :
“Me, myself, and I” 🥀 👿
2026-10-27 17:35:01
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a_bum :
my essay was how privileged I am and how nothing bad has ever happened to me💀 i got in tho so i guess it worked
2026-10-27 02:55:54
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Nullframe :
“No shit there I was in the South China Sea”
2026-10-27 02:29:29
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rustedpinegirl ⚢ 𓋹 :
why do american colleges require a personal essay instead of a clear focus on the topic and related academic achievements that align with the subject you’re applying for…
2026-10-28 20:48:32
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meowww :
my hook is, "Not once in my life had I wanted a line to be longer… until that moment." is that good?
2026-10-26 22:09:53
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🐒enna :
I hate collage essays
2026-10-27 00:19:40
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Cawxs :
Thank god I’m already in college the standards have changed so much in the last 2 years😭😭😭
2026-10-27 12:22:41
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Saban :
It’s called hooking the audience
2026-10-27 06:18:05
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