Mark Hernandez | Writing Coach
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aurora :
My hook was a saying from a popular TikTok trend. How is that?
2026-10-31 08:05:58
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Mark Hernandez | Writing Coach :
Here’s why, without spoilers: Shawshank shows the value of planning and delayed gratification; Empire shows the value of taking chances; Pacific Rim teaches you how to lean into a genre and dominate without fear; Project Hail Mary shows how to be sentimental and serious at once; and Jaws shows the power of ingenuity and storytelling.
2026-10-31 01:00:56
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user18382984959284 :
Sorry I’m repeating but @user18382984959284: Hi, what do u think about the topic of mimicry, how I mimic others. But it goes further than that, I tend to copy them with dancing, singing, playing an instrument, talking, laughing, etc. idk where my coping ends and when my original identity begins. I’ve moved up to the top ensembles of band and dance as evidenced?
2026-10-31 03:17:46
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이온 :
do u think that “Im korean and I don’t like kimchi.” is a good hook? I was gonna relate it to how the stereotypical korean likes kimchi and how ive never felt like i fit into anything in my life so i learnt how to be independent
2026-10-31 04:29:58
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portalmap1 :
Hah Shawshank was my usc quick take choice
2026-10-31 02:04:19
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Morium | মরিয়াম :
what do u think of the opening hook being “”Welcome aboard American airlines”….. was my favorite thing to hear as a kid”
2026-11-01 04:59:57
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3 IS THE MAGIC NUMBER :
spiderman 2 And back to the future!
2026-10-31 06:08:28
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nayo :
lowk what Abt this: The sun was beating down on me as I struggled to catch my breath. I could barely stand.
2026-10-31 18:47:59
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David Melnikov :
Can u rate this hook? Running around naked and armed is not for the weak.” It’s about a video game that inspired me
2026-10-31 06:27:16
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Harley | College Counselor :
I’ve been explaining so many things in terms of movies and filmmaking that I might make a video about it
2026-10-31 01:58:52
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volt.z :
Why do many other creators recommend putting hooks with dialogue or without context
2026-10-31 18:59:26
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ryan :
I love shawshank!!
2026-10-31 01:06:35
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Tiffany :
what do you think of a simple sentence like “i love plain tart” and i talk about froyo
2026-11-03 00:33:24
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getoutmystace :
Apocalypse Now!!!!!!!
2026-11-03 06:36:22
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Mark Hernandez | Writing Coach :
I wouldn’t watch them all in a row.
2026-10-31 01:01:08
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miril7776 :
Can you review my first sentence please: I used a folded piece of paper to bear the weight of a million-ton skyscraper.
2026-10-31 02:01:52
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kimchiman79 :
What do you think about my first line "There's a girl in an eczema commercial that has followed me for as long as I can remember."
2026-10-31 03:52:52
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riley 🌞💗 :
can you review my opening sentence: I never expected an orange creature with an enormous yellow mustache to influence the way I see the world.
2026-10-31 01:08:35
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Charley J Millard :
How is this hook? "On November 15, 2025, over a plate of chicken mole at my favorite Mexican restaurant, my mom casually revealed to me that my father, the man who raised me had gotten a vasectomy 20 years before I was born."
2026-11-01 23:24:41
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