Then why did James Joyce end his book on the word “the”?
2026-11-05 13:07:37
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SalzigeCola :
I find it hard to understand what makes the word "strong". Could you explain that a bit more? :)
2026-11-04 16:27:32
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maniimaniimanii :
But should it be a varied approach with this too? Like how its better to have sentences of varying lengths to make it flow and read better, so would it be befter to not force end last word to be strong in each sentence?
2026-11-04 23:07:50
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spookyandwithdrawn :
what exactly determines whether a word is strong or weak?
2026-11-05 01:57:54
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Merci :
I thought I was CRAZY for thinking that an ending word could sound "soft"
2026-11-09 08:42:49
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Lea | Fantasy Writer 📚 :
I had never thought of this before. Saving this video for when I start revisions on my first draft. Thank you!
2026-11-08 22:27:37
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Carolin_lein :
gonna use this advice in my bachelor thesis so my sentences sound stronger 😭
2026-11-04 22:34:07
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Super Mario :
“She had never been this close to earth.”
2026-11-05 15:49:24
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Sarikutado :
what if I'm writing a comic
2026-11-05 11:11:26
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MG Loving Wendy :
This is really good advice. Thanks for sharing.
2026-11-05 18:05:49
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dead lilac :
honestly I felt like in the second example the writer’s original version is somehow hitting better. yes it ends on a weaker word, but the wording itself makes it more interesting than just ‘she’d never seen it before’. just an observation 🫡
2026-11-05 10:54:23
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l.awallis :
Omg, yea! I love these micro-analyses of writing.
2026-11-04 23:23:38
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lily splodge :
is there a better way to display action thats not just "she swong her sword" or "he hit back" ect
2026-11-05 02:29:16
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Vivid Kei 🔑 :
Ok okay.
2026-11-07 05:28:25
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