@soytecky: This was the prompt I was responding to: "Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story." #college #personalessay #collegeessay
the essay is very emotional and I loved reading it, i’m assuming your major is law, the only minor thing I’d say is some of the parts about the “grades become more than numbers” sounds cliche, and the transition between the courthouse and the friend from venezuela seems rushed, if you just make it seemless the essay would be really good
2026-11-09 08:19:35
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AI GENERATED🤖7️⃣ :
i keep thinking about how my writing sounds, so yeah, walter again
2026-11-09 07:35:05
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