Aj Saxsma
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BluePhoenix :
I love how a lot of your videos are human situations and at the very end you talk about how it can be used to help writers with their story development. I also love how many people miss that part and just focus on your story. Its fun.
2026-09-17 21:26:12
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brujita_majo :
I love finding it. It usually takes me to actually see them on my second read. It’s why I always do a second read. I missed so much the first time.
2026-09-17 16:19:02
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Jeun 🌙 :
Also even though some readers never notice the metaphor, it creates a great atmosphere regardless and everyone enjoys a story that feels alive!
2026-09-17 16:26:35
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Dihn_Bailey_Author :
I’ve been blocking for like 2 years and the past few days I’ve come across a few of your vids and I want you to know that you’ve helped me immensely
2026-09-17 16:53:26
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mtdpk mtdpk :
Hey... Recently I've been getting feedback on my pacing. I got support from a professional editor, and that's the thing they noticed is I'm moving through plot points quickly and relying on "spectacle" too much, my story is fantasy.... So there has to be some "spectacle" involved. But readers didn't complain much about it. So... Is there any way to reduce this bad behaviour? Like some tips? Or do you have a video on this? Thanks to your videos, I've finally finished book 01 of my long story and decided to go on publishing... Editor generally gave a positive feedback, that's the only problem they highlighted. In last sentence they said that with a metaphor 😅 "Swung your sword and let the dust fall, Let the moments breath" Editor said they personally loved the story concept.
2026-09-17 17:26:01
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